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H-E-A-R-T of L-O-V-E

               Oh how I love you.
             Cherishing each moment,
            for you have opened             
           my heart with your
           everlasting and precious 
            love. Yet so tender;                  .uoy evol I woh hO
            You place God                   ,tnemom hcae gnihsirehC
             first in your life. And                 denepo evah uoy rof
              I love you more for that.              ruoy htiw traeh ym
                Hold on to the other           suoicerp dna gnitsalreve
                  half of my heart,                   ;rednet os teY .evol
                    for one day we                           doG ecalp uoY
                      Shall put them                 dnA .efil ruoy ni tsrif
                        Together                .taht rof erom uoy evol I   
                          As one                     rehto eht ot no dloH   
                            With                          ,traeh ym fo flah
                               God.                        ew yad eno rof
                                                            meht tup llahS
                                                                   eno sA

Pace, G


Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 2/18/2018 3:19:00 PM
Very nice! Yes, God has to come first in all things!
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Date: 1/7/2018 4:26:00 PM
Very Artistic.
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Date: 11/22/2017 6:08:00 PM
What an amazing form!
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Date: 8/17/2017 9:20:00 AM
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Date: 2/10/2017 12:40:00 PM
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Date: 12/25/2016 9:11:00 PM
It’s wonderful. How did you do it!
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Date: 8/28/2016 9:07:00 PM
I like your poetry. I have a question How did you get to shape your poetry on the computer? Is it difficult?
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Date: 8/28/2016 10:11:00 PM
Hello Darlene...I really appreciate your comment. :) It was pretty difficult especially with me being a perfectionist.
Date: 8/8/2016 2:54:00 AM
I applaud your obvious intelligence...This piece of enterprising prose is certainly very cleverly constructed. Nicely done, Pace - A seven for original thought and painstaking endeavour! My best regards. :) john
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Date: 8/8/2016 4:42:00 AM
Wow, your comment left me speechless...I really appreciate it!!!!
Date: 12/26/2015 3:54:00 AM
wow...what a wonderful poem.. and the half hearts that waiting to re-unite, i say RE-UNITE :) are and peace my friend :))
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Date: 10/28/2014 5:42:00 AM
awesome, awesome write, Pace! i love the shape and most of all the sentiments in your words. that is a very beautiful love.
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Date: 9/18/2014 7:38:00 PM
Amazing. I love this. Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 9/6/2014 9:53:00 PM
This is artistically honed and wonderfully written... Thank you, for sharing!
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Date: 7/13/2014 3:53:00 PM
What a fine shape poem! kudos on it! Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/13/2014 3:00:00 PM stopped me in my wowwed me with your picture and held me with your content..........Tim
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Date: 7/13/2014 3:39:00 AM
This looks amazing. It's a great read too. A well put together poem, good on ya.
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Date: 6/10/2014 6:51:00 PM
Sweet! I dig it, what an awesome job you did here, amazing :)
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Date: 4/29/2014 1:47:00 AM
Original, I must say
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Date: 2/24/2014 10:04:00 AM
This is dope. Plus the shape of heart....very creative. Nice Write.
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Date: 2/10/2014 3:04:00 AM
Wow Pace this is such a beautiful piece......and I love how you ecompassed God in all of this.
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Date: 9/9/2013 3:26:00 PM
wow very pretty I love it
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Date: 4/8/2013 3:32:00 AM
wow,wow,wow...beautiful write..enjoyed every bit of it :-)
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Date: 1/2/2013 3:16:00 PM
Beautiful Pace, a message like th is one takes on a life of its own. The form is quite amazing too.
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Date: 12/28/2012 11:51:00 AM
Very very creative.
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Date: 12/24/2012 8:50:00 PM
Pace, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
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Date: 12/12/2012 8:28:00 PM
Beautiful poem. Well done. Warm thoughts, Ralph
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