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Tree's gold now glows It lies cold on The lawn, grows mold Contest:Bauk-Than Than-Bauk Sponsor:Charles Messina Date: December 07, 2020

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Reason A. Poteet

Date: 2/20/2021 10:18:00 AM

Brilliant switcheroo, Sara, from gold to mold. Congrats!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/20/2021 1:42:00 PM

Thanks, Reason. I appreciate you dropping by with congrats and taking time to read it as well. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/17/2021 5:09:00 AM

Picturesque imagery! Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/17/2021 7:09:00 AM

Kim, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

Charles Messina

Date: 2/15/2021 9:28:00 PM

Lovely, Sara. Congrats on your win!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/16/2021 2:19:00 AM

Charles, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 12/10/2020 12:40:00 PM

lovely than bauk - I like this form

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/10/2020 3:01:00 PM

Jack, Thanks..It is short unless one cares to take it on for a few stanzas. If a person can say what is needed in a few short words then it is a good form for them. Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/9/2020 7:15:00 PM

Superbly penned, Sara! Hard-to-do too, and your 'BT' reads seamlessly and meaningfully. G.L. in the contest, Gershon

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/10/2020 4:54:00 AM

Gershon, Thanks for the kind review. I did have a hard time writing this one for some reason. I think I was not thinking clearly. Sara

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/9/2020 6:32:00 PM

They do look splendid when they are all revved in gold, but it also tells us they'll be closing up for the season soon, thank you for sharing your delightful verse today, and grateful for your kind visit too.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/10/2020 4:53:00 AM

MRR, Yes, we know that ole man winter is around the corner. Here in the south we never know if it will be mild or be a really bad one. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 12/9/2020 6:11:00 PM

Wow! You used this form well to show how fleeting life amid gold leaves can be! The picture is gorgeous!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/10/2020 4:44:00 AM

Jennifer, Thanks for dropping by. The leaves only get one summer then they help build up the earth. Even in death they have a purpose. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

John Watt

Date: 12/9/2020 3:12:00 PM

Nicely done, Sara, and a beautiful picture to go with it. For the contest I think he said 2 words only in the title. Enjoy your day ~ John

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/10/2020 4:40:00 AM

John, Thanks for the information. I like that picture also. I only have one tree and I think maybe have had two beautiful seasons of color in about 20 years. The weather doesn't seem to agree with the tree. Sara..Thanks for the visit.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/8/2020 7:22:00 PM

Takes a bit to fit these together! Well done, Sara!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/9/2020 2:32:00 AM

Kim, I agree it takes a little time especially this reverse one. Sara