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Faster Deeper

He went faster when that's what she said When she said deeper his face turned red I can't be rebuilt I'm in to the hilt Let's just let that fish go instead!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2017 6:11:00 PM

hahaha GREAT limerick writing.

Pat Adams
Date: 8/9/2017 6:19:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. It seems quite a few people like fishing poems!! ;o) rPAT

Joseph Soper

Date: 8/9/2017 2:11:00 AM

Very funny Pat... enjoyed the read...

Pat Adams
Date: 8/9/2017 8:03:00 AM

Thanks Joseph, glad you liked it! rPAT

Derek Noble Ayi

Date: 8/8/2017 3:13:00 PM

Hahahaaaaa , nice piece

Pat Adams
Date: 8/8/2017 3:45:00 PM

Thanks Derek, for the comment and for commenting your comment!!! 8) rPAT

Anna Hopper

Date: 8/8/2017 10:55:00 AM

Lol cute

Pat Adams
Date: 8/8/2017 3:43:00 PM

Thank you Anna. I thought it was, but only in a manly man sort of way!!! rPAT 8)

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 8/8/2017 9:13:00 AM

Here's a tip: let 'er rip! :-) GOTD! (giggle of the day award)

Pat Adams
Date: 8/8/2017 3:42:00 PM

Thanks John. Your nod is always appreciated!! 8) RPA