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“ESSENTIALS” Cluttered contents exposed by an open cupboard door Time once again the enemy—staring at the clock on the wall Just two nights— in Paris- ‘luggage’ and ‘baggage’ to be kept small Life becomes weighted with each passing day Reflections on life—real ‘Essentials’ to pack on our way SIMPLICITY—life is far too complicated-- new goals to be reached Striving for social standing, wealth, bigger and better in being Past failures, future gains—elusive happiness remains Present moments, not projected perfection to be gained PEACE—that comes from knowing—who we are and where we are going Avoiding criticism, being judgemental of others Peace grows from the heart, not the head Tolerating ourselves and others instead GRATITUDE—appreciating small things we learn awareness and discernment Counting our blessings daily, we finally grasp our gratitude Life becomes meaningful when lived for others Self-importance and stress disappear- becoming soul lovers Copywright©2013—Kim van Breda

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Date: 4/12/2013 3:33:00 AM
Well thought out and good clean advice to live by. Though I'm not sure it's a sonnet, per say, however the words themselves were a treat for the mind. I like the part about learning to tolerate yourself before tolerating others. Reminds me of the bible verse "Judge not others lest be judged"... good poem!
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Date: 4/7/2013 7:48:00 AM
Kim I like the message and the format...David
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 4/7/2013 9:12:00 AM
Thanks David-- encouragement coming from you is always valued.
Date: 4/7/2013 6:25:00 AM
Very expressive and creative work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 4/7/2013 9:14:00 AM
Thanks Sara- You are always complimentary and I appreciate that. Love your work too.
Date: 4/6/2013 2:22:00 PM
- Love it.... well done Kim !!!!- Bless you.- Have a great weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/6/2013 12:59:00 PM
Kim, i like the way you describe and identify a few reflections of our everyday essential life. and hopefully the reason for some of these-- is to clear a little stress and depression. Hope you are well and not depressed after reading your last poem "PERCEPTION REFLECTIONS ON DEPRESSION" however love the message here.... ...xox~ Linda
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 4/6/2013 2:00:00 PM
Yes... this is what I have learned works well. Thanks for encouragement Linda. xx

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