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Written - 22nd May 2024

I love every hair upon your head
Although you've hardly any left Fred
Oh, those silver strands
I stroked with my hands
Are appearing all over the bed.

I’m peeved that you complain Eleanor
I am hearing from you when you snore
And you talk in sleep
To a guy named Pete
But admit I award it a Cor!

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/29/2024 12:44:00 AM

Simply Darling, Beryl.~ Pangie Romios

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/28/2024 7:18:00 PM

Good job, Beryl! Janice

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/28/2024 7:27:00 PM

Thank you Janice… Beryl

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/25/2024 3:12:00 AM

Love and fun characterise your limericks. You did well.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/28/2024 7:26:00 PM

Thank you Victor… Beryl

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/23/2024 3:58:00 PM

Lol. I bet Pete is happy, because he doesn't have to hear Eleanor snore!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/23/2024 4:25:00 PM

I’m sure he is, sharing the delights but not the noisy nights. Thank you Anaya… Beryl

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/23/2024 9:12:00 AM

Dear Beryl, Your playful poem brings a smile to my face. It's a delightful blend of humor and affection, capturing the quirks and nuances of relationships with wit and charm. Your wonderful words show us of the beauty found in love's imperfections and the joy of sharing life's silly moments together. Thank you for brightening my day with your delightful verse. - Blessings, Daniel

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/23/2024 4:23:00 PM

Thank you Daniel, I agree it’s a joy to share some silliness together, as they say a laugh a day keeps sadness’s away. Blessings in return, Beryl