Color's Grand Show

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Elemental
Created by Charles Messina. This form consists of 7 lines with 7 syllables in each line. And a rhyme pattern of AABBCCA. The first and last lines must be the same. And an "Elemental" must pertain to all 3 elements- (earth, water, and sky).

Nature tints morning skies blue and inks water the same hue. Beams of sunlight paint plants green, enhancing the earthly scene. Ice crystals form a rainbow and to top color's grand show, Nature tints morning skies blue. (Elemental) 7/08/2021 Elemental Poetry Contest Sponsored by: charles messina

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Charles Messina

Date: 7/31/2021 5:33:00 AM

Great visuals, Emile. A lovely write my friend. Congratulations on a fine win! Charlie

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/31/2021 7:33:00 AM

Thanks, Charles, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 7/28/2021 1:31:00 PM

Wonderful depiction and vivid imagination El!!

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/28/2021 1:40:00 PM

Thanks, Smita, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

David Mchattie

Date: 7/8/2021 7:37:00 PM

A tricky write indeed. Well done my friend. Stay well.

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/9/2021 6:55:00 AM

Thanks, David, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/8/2021 5:04:00 PM

So gorgeous. I simply love this creation. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/9/2021 6:55:00 AM

Thanks, Regina, I appreciate your support. Emile.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/8/2021 11:46:00 AM

Simple and so beautiful, Emile. Good luck in Charles's contest.

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/8/2021 12:25:00 PM

Thanks Milt, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/8/2021 11:14:00 AM

A rainbow of images "tinted" in poetic excellence my friend. I wrote about twilight, you highlighted the glory of morning! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings of the rainbow to you!

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/8/2021 11:15:00 AM

Thanks so much, Sam, your words always bring a welcomed smile my friend, Emile.