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At Civil Twilight

It was at civil twilight when my lips met his. I had been dreaming of that kiss since the time I had first seen him earlier that week! Brilliant red and orange splashed the sky. The heavens were ablaze with passion’s hues! Our mouths touched, and as they moved together, my burning expectations (If they were to have been given a sound) sputtered! Although I kept on going through the motions, my lips, after just one minute, knew there was no hope; they were simply fizzling out! Wondering and wondering why there was no chemisty and why he had no clue by this time in his life on how to smoothly kiss a woman, I gently broke from my embrace with him. I asked myself whether or not I should just break things off right there and then. The answer came to me with the clarity of that brilliant sunset. I told him I had acted too much in haste and that I knew I was not ready then for a relationship. But I decided not to tell him how horribly he kissed, and that, in fact, with all the drool his mouth emitted, his kissing was disgusting! I was as cordial as I could be. After all, this had occurred at civil twilight. March 4, 2019 for Edward Ibeh's Pick A Title - Free Verse Poetry Contest Title chosen: Civil Twilight

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Date: 3/26/2020 8:48:00 PM
How would you tell someone they were terrible at kissing....you can't. Congrats on your HM Andrea. I remember this one. xxoo
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Date: 3/26/2020 2:11:00 PM
You always write with such honesty, my friend. Your narrative story really flows and I wanted to know what happened! Thanks for not keeping me in suspense! Congratulations on your HM!
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Date: 3/9/2019 7:49:00 PM
Thanks for taking part in my contest, Andrea:-) Awesome poem with striking imagery! Lack of chemistry is a deal-breaker, lol! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/7/2019 9:33:00 PM
Wow, you had me all a flutter, and then, hmmm. :) You completely conveyed your sense of the situation at that moment. Moving on. :)
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Date: 3/7/2019 9:17:00 AM
Good it was at Civil Twilight. LOL..You might not have been so civil if it had not. LOL..Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
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Date: 3/5/2019 7:06:00 AM
I suppose this happens a lot. A break up with civility..chemistry is everything. You wrote it well, Andrea.
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Date: 3/5/2019 6:56:00 AM
Misty chemisty. This is taking your mind off of the news and Trump. Can't believe that your spell check did not catch that Democrat who died in mortal combat and like a cat we told to go scat or we would knock them flat.
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Date: 3/5/2019 3:49:00 AM
Andrea, you had lulled me into a romantic mood, showing me the red and orange twilight, setting the mood, then ....what? I think the title you choose is PERFECT for this poem that you wrote for the title you chose. Love it!
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Date: 3/4/2019 8:54:00 PM
Hi Andrea, You created such a beautiful setting. Nice imagery and contest. It started off so romantic. And then wham! Good take on the contest theme. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
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