City Glittering Nightlife

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As the moon bathes me with ardent solace where does my day lead, as I’m drawn to you with bleeding tears I will trace your lead in this concrete web Holding effortlessly still surrounded by dim veil City illumination lends means to its forged beating soul Intoxicating control drawing to false streets of dreams Sightless to being Dismiss urge to yield to a submissive embrace Enraptured by seductive city glittering nightlife 9/25/2016

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Space Cadet

Date: 9/26/2016 12:46:00 PM

Excellent piece. Congratulations on the placement. Thank you for sharing. W

Lu Loo

Date: 9/25/2016 7:08:00 PM

Sweet Eve- lovely poem, I remember reading this for BW contest-back with my congrats on this placement also, well deserved :)-luloo

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/25/2016 8:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your lovely win, Eve:) great poem indeed:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/24/2016 9:42:00 PM

Hello, Eve, once again, Congratulations on your well-deserved win. :):):) Stop by my latest blog "Last Laugh." if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Eve Roper
Date: 9/24/2016 10:15:00 PM

Wow!! I do too :-) smile big when I win in your contest Hugs

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 9/24/2016 9:42:00 PM

by the way, I smile big anytime I see you on my winning list. :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/9/2016 3:49:00 PM

A beautiful poem, Eve, with 'glittering nightlife' imagery that can lead to many directions. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper
Date: 9/9/2016 4:27:00 PM

Thank you Sandra, Hugs Eve

Paul Callus

Date: 9/9/2016 2:08:00 PM

City lights tempt and seduce, but they can be so double-faced! Both poem and accompanying picture are lovely, Eve. Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul

Eve Roper
Date: 9/9/2016 4:27:00 PM

Thank you Paul, Hugs Eve