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City Glittering Nightlife

As the moon bathes me with ardent solace where does my day lead, as I’m drawn to you with bleeding tears I will trace your lead in this concrete web Holding effortlessly still surrounded by dim veil City illumination lends means to its forged beating soul Intoxicating control drawing to false streets of dreams Sightless to being Dismiss urge to yield to a submissive embrace Enraptured by seductive city glittering nightlife 9/25/2016
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Cadet Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 12:46 PM
Excellent piece. Congratulations on the placement. Thank you for sharing. W
Scars Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 7:08 PM
Sweet Eve- lovely poem, I remember reading this for BW contest-back with my congrats on this placement also, well deserved :)-luloo
Daniel Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 8:23 AM
Congratulations on your lovely win, Eve:) great poem indeed:)
A   Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 9:42 PM
Hello, Eve, once again, Congratulations on your well-deserved win. :):):) Stop by my latest blog "Last Laugh." if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Roper Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 10:15 PM
Wow!! I do too :-) smile big when I win in your contest Hugs
A   Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 9:42 PM
by the way, I smile big anytime I see you on my winning list. :)
Haight Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 3:49 PM
A beautiful poem, Eve, with 'glittering nightlife' imagery that can lead to many directions. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Thank you Sandra, Hugs Eve
Callus Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 2:08 PM
City lights tempt and seduce, but they can be so double-faced! Both poem and accompanying picture are lovely, Eve. Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul
Roper Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Thank you Paul, Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 11:30 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderfully penned poem and I love your image too !
Roper Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 4:28 PM
Thank you Constance, for the placement in your contest. Hugs Eve
Hay Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 9:38 AM
Lovely picture to accompany your very visual write, well done Eve, warm regards, Laura.
Roper Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 4:28 PM
Thank you Laura, Hugs Eve
Nayak Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 9:21 AM
A very beautiful write , Excellent words....city and glittering nightlife presented so well, hearty congrats dear Eve Roper!!....love, Anu:)
Roper Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 4:28 PM
Thank you Anulaxmi, Hugs Eve
Scars Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 7:52 AM
Eve, back with my congrats lovely lady :)-luloo
Roper Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 4:29 PM
Thank you sweet gril, Hugs Eve
Warrior Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 8:16 PM
Congrats!!!...you won Eve...yahooo lol...god bless...^WW^
Roper Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 8:55 PM
Thank you, ^WW^, and congratulations to you as well :-) Hugs
Scars Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 10:57 AM
Eve, perfect for what BW is looking for, this is wonderfully written, good luck lovely lady :)-luloo
Warrior Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 9:13 AM
Very well constructed Eve...best of luck...god bless...^WW^
Roper Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 6:38 PM
^^WW^^, thank you :-)
Turner Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 8:57 AM
They are entrancing. I never was much of a city person myself. I'll choose an old country honky tonk anytime. Lol I enjoyed your poem Mrs Eve.
Roper Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 6:35 PM
Thank you, Daniel, have not been to one since I was 30... Hugs
Nyaga Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 5:32 AM
A very beautiful write Eve.. // peace and blessings
Roper Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 7:29 PM
Thank you, Lewis. Hugs
Daniel Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 4:20 AM
Wonderful deep write, Eve:) all the best in the contest:)
Roper Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 7:28 PM
Jo, thank you :-)
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