Get Your Premium Membership

BEAUTIFUL MEAL

my mouth munch with joy the morsels flee my saucer my mother's handwork

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/29/2014 5:58:00 PM
Kolapo... A nicely done Haiku.... LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 11/15/2010 11:54:00 PM
Thank you everyone...I'm privileged to win and even more honored to have you all congratulate me...Though i would have loved to come first,lol...Thanks anyway
Login to Reply
Date: 11/15/2010 9:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Kolapo in Deborah's contest Holiday Haiku. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 11/15/2010 8:12:00 AM
congrats on your HM in the contest with this endearing entry
Login to Reply
Date: 11/14/2010 6:20:00 PM
Mothers are great at this joy Kolapo, Congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 11/12/2010 4:55:00 PM
CUTE one, I love good munchies!! Congratulations!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/12/2010 11:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Deb's contest, Kolapo! Always, audrey
Login to Reply
Date: 11/12/2010 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved success in the contest with this delightful haiku, Kolapo. Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 11/12/2010 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Kolapo
Login to Reply
Date: 11/12/2010 8:30:00 AM
Congrats Kolapo on your HM in the Haiku contest with this wonderful write and entry .. enjoy your special honor today with luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 11/1/2010 12:49:00 PM
Hello new poet friend. Line 1 you want the word "munch" Please do not capitalize "My" and write the title as ...my mouth munch joy Also, leave a space at the bottom and tell the holiday like *Christmas/ and it is a lovely frozen image which we all hold dear in our hearts, eating that first hot cookie from Mom. Light & Love
Login to Reply