Beautiful Meal

my mouth munch with joy
the morsels flee my saucer
my mother's handwork
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 29, 2014 at 5:58 PM
Kolapo... A nicely done Haiku.... LINDA
Olapoju Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 11:54 PM
Thank you everyone...I'm privileged to win and even more honored to have you all congratulate me...Though i would have loved to come first,lol...Thanks anyway
Brown Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 9:41 AM
Congratulations on your win Kolapo in Deborah's contest Holiday Haiku. Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 8:12 AM
congrats on your HM in the contest with this endearing entry
Freeman Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 6:20 PM
Mothers are great at this joy Kolapo, Congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 4:55 PM
CUTE one, I love good munchies!! Congratulations!
Haick Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 11:41 AM
Congratulations on your win in Deb's contest, Kolapo! Always, audrey
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November 12, 2010 at 9:52 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved success in the contest with this delightful haiku, Kolapo. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 9:28 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Kolapo
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November 12, 2010 at 8:30 AM
Congrats Kolapo on your HM in the Haiku contest with this wonderful write and entry .. enjoy your special honor today with luv..
Guzzi Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 12:49 PM
Hello new poet friend. Line 1 you want the word "munch" Please do not capitalize "My" and write the title as ...my mouth munch joy Also, leave a space at the bottom and tell the holiday like *Christmas/ and it is a lovely frozen image which we all hold dear in our hearts, eating that first hot cookie from Mom. Light & Love
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