Beautiful Meal

my mouth munch with joy
the morsels flee my saucer
my mother's handwork

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/29/2014 5:58:00 PM
Kolapo... A nicely done Haiku.... LINDA
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Date: 11/15/2010 11:54:00 PM
Thank you everyone...I'm privileged to win and even more honored to have you all congratulate me...Though i would have loved to come first,lol...Thanks anyway
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Date: 11/15/2010 9:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Kolapo in Deborah's contest Holiday Haiku. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2010 8:12:00 AM
congrats on your HM in the contest with this endearing entry
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Date: 11/14/2010 6:20:00 PM
Mothers are great at this joy Kolapo, Congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/12/2010 4:55:00 PM
CUTE one, I love good munchies!! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/12/2010 11:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Deb's contest, Kolapo! Always, audrey
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Date: 11/12/2010 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved success in the contest with this delightful haiku, Kolapo. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/12/2010 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Kolapo
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Date: 11/12/2010 8:30:00 AM
Congrats Kolapo on your HM in the Haiku contest with this wonderful write and entry .. enjoy your special honor today with luv..
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Date: 11/1/2010 12:49:00 PM
Hello new poet friend. Line 1 you want the word "munch" Please do not capitalize "My" and write the title as ...my mouth munch joy Also, leave a space at the bottom and tell the holiday like *Christmas/ and it is a lovely frozen image which we all hold dear in our hearts, eating that first hot cookie from Mom. Light & Love
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