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Beautiful Meal

my mouth munch with joy the morsels flee my saucer my mother's handwork

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 5:58:00 PM

Kolapo... A nicely done Haiku.... LINDA

Kolapo Olapoju

Date: 11/15/2010 11:54:00 PM

Thank you everyone...I'm privileged to win and even more honored to have you all congratulate me...Though i would have loved to come first,lol...Thanks anyway

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/15/2010 9:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Kolapo in Deborah's contest Holiday Haiku. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 11/15/2010 8:12:00 AM

congrats on your HM in the contest with this endearing entry

John Freeman

Date: 11/14/2010 6:20:00 PM

Mothers are great at this joy Kolapo, Congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2010 4:55:00 PM

CUTE one, I love good munchies!! Congratulations!

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/12/2010 11:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Deb's contest, Kolapo! Always, audrey

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/12/2010 9:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your well-deserved success in the contest with this delightful haiku, Kolapo. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/12/2010 9:28:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win, Kolapo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/12/2010 8:30:00 AM

Congrats Kolapo on your HM in the Haiku contest with this wonderful write and entry .. enjoy your special honor today with luv..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/1/2010 12:49:00 PM

Hello new poet friend. Line 1 you want the word "munch" Please do not capitalize "My" and write the title as ...my mouth munch joy Also, leave a space at the bottom and tell the holiday like *Christmas/ and it is a lovely frozen image which we all hold dear in our hearts, eating that first hot cookie from Mom. Light & Love