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bad legacies

You left 1884 behind, 1961 came you misused it 1972, you were doomed 1990, it seemed like joy but no 2016 your people smiled in their death see the homeless, fatherless, widows now bury their husbands, heads rolling in roads that are gutters People roasted like fish yet it never mattered to you, only drinks and women did See the troubles your children face, many bellies are swollen, yet these bellies can't talk, they fear execution When shall you correct these bad legacies? The desert has visited the grass field And the hungry mourners are fleeing Into the hands of death.

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Date: 4/5/2025 10:55:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 4/2/2025 6:21:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup! Glad you've decided to join this amazing community of poets. This is a very dark and foreboding piece of poetry that leaves more questions than answers. Why these particular years? Were they political upheavals and who exactly left these bad legacies? I think it could be any one of us which is how I see it. Good brain food with much to think about. Kudos Wafor.
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Date: 4/5/2025 3:04:00 AM
Exactly who left this upheavals????? What is our faith???

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