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Alone In the Forest

The rhythm of the stream nearby and the grazing sound of the deer were the finest music I had ever heard. I could still see the glimpses of the cutest cheetah cub,who came as a refugee and the malicious monkey and its wavy long tail. Those were the good old days where the, migratory birds perform meteoric murmuration, before roosting on my arms . In pursuit of the streams round me; in hunt of the deers and cheetah, I was about to inquire my neighbors, later savvied I was lingering there all alone, I sobbed like a missed child, gazing at the sky, with a vacuous mind. Suddenly an endemic bird landed on me and said I am the last tree of this forest.

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Date: 3/5/2020 11:51:00 AM
A very thoughtful and touching write from a very experienced poet! Great poem, Supraja.
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Date: 3/4/2020 3:15:00 PM
wow,that last line was sure a surprise and I LOVED it.
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Date: 3/2/2020 8:38:00 PM
Wonderful write Supraja.. May be other animals are thinking.. The most destructive virus in the universe is human..The way you present the theme is captivating..
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Date: 3/2/2020 4:40:00 PM
Once again, your unmistakable style of writing is most prominent, Supraha. Superb personification. Those good old days are fast ebbing away thanks to greedy human beings. I'll join you in shedding a tear or two! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 3/2/2020 8:44:00 AM
A very touching poem, Supraja. Much enjoyed. Superbly penned.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 3/2/2020 11:03:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 3/2/2020 7:20:00 AM
Enjoyed the sights and sounds of nature, Supraja--I know your nature verses come from the heart and it shows. Powerful ending.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 3/2/2020 11:03:00 AM
So nice of you, Vijay. Glad you liked it.
Date: 3/2/2020 4:27:00 AM
What a touching beautiful poem! Excellently written dearest, Supraja! Loved it!
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 3/2/2020 5:02:00 AM
Thank you so much, Demetrios. Glad you loved it.

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