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A Yawn Within the Fields

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Fields of spun gold silk Somber auburn shade On ardent warm day Resonant hum breath Yawns whiff of cool air Espy hushed cries Dry in silence Nature's quaint rhythm Weft lingers round Staggering Growth within Deep recess Rich trove Savor Peace. 2/4/2020

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Date: 2/16/2020 5:54:00 PM
Poetry for the Gods, Eve, O' how you make them happy . . .
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Date: 2/6/2020 6:49:00 PM
utterly gorgeous, Eve. Was there a contest for this?
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Date: 2/6/2020 3:59:00 PM
Wowser Eve reading this took me out to a glorious golden field! In fact so descriptive that my hay fever acted up! Lol beautiful my dear simply beautiful! Congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 2/6/2020 7:32:00 AM
This is exquisite, Eve.
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Date: 2/5/2020 10:57:00 AM
Beautiful write Eve.....I savoured your breathtaking words. Hugs
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Date: 2/5/2020 9:56:00 AM
i adore the imagery especially in the first stanza, you write this form so well Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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