A Time For Us

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our days numbered measured in moments precious time left cherished by the drop our gift to each other for me for you a time for us gathered gems treasured in a private whirl of memories crystallized the diamond buffed the end draws near for you for me a time for us AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on August 19, 2020 for contest A TIME FOR US sponsored by JCB BURL - RANKED 1ST

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Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 9/9/2020 12:20:00 AM

Line congrats on your top win and such a beautiful image your poem creates!! beautiful!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/9/2020 9:37:00 AM

Thank you so much, Krish. Most appreciated ~

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 8/27/2020 7:47:00 AM

Super Win, Line. Beach image carries to text, mention of treasure, as are shells. I'm a huge fan of 'in a private whirl of memories'. Your entire poem shares the precious love sentiment.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/27/2020 8:22:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely comment, Sigrid ~

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/19/2020 2:50:00 PM

Wonderfully done, Line. God bless you and best of luck in the contest :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/27/2020 8:23:00 AM

Thank for your much appreciated visit and comment, Regina ~