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A Quiet Storm

I heard not a sound that morn As lightning lit up the dawn The sky was dark and it was torn By lightning strikes that Zeus spawned Caught in the midst of a quiet storm I heard not a sound that morn Silence had become the norm All the petals on the rose were shorn The dark clouds that the sky had worn Released the rain in silent sighs I heard not a sound that morn But I saw anger in the skies The trees outside began to shake As on the wind the storm was born Leaving a silent fury in its wake But I heard not a sound that morn -- 2-14-18 Contest: Describe a thunderstorm without sound Sponsor: Brenda Chiri

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Date: 5/3/2018 3:34:00 PM
Well done -JT
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Date: 2/23/2018 7:12:00 PM
I do so enjoy a well written quatern. You made it very smooth flowing, Joseph. Both of us focuses in on the god of storms!
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Date: 2/21/2018 2:31:00 PM
wonderfully expressed, joseph...i enjoyed your metaphors!...huggs
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Date: 2/20/2018 8:45:00 PM
Oh Joseph, such an alluring poem of haunting imagery and beauty. I love how your first lines descends through the following stanzas - the effect is dramatic and magnificent! ~Susan
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Date: 2/15/2018 12:12:00 PM
An overwhelming poem. Sometimes storm comes silently. Sometimes we are compelled to keep quiet even hit by storm.
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Date: 2/15/2018 5:01:00 AM
- A breathtaking poem, Joseph - We have a storm over us at this moment, it's not quiet at all - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/14/2018 8:39:00 PM
What a beautiful Quatern Joseph!
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Date: 2/14/2018 2:03:00 PM
WoW! Joseph, This is so well written and the imagery is top notch. I could just picture the whole scene. Well done. PS, Happy Valentine's Day:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/14/2018 9:51:00 AM
Wow! This is an amazing poem. I love the repetition and imagery. This will do well, I am sure Joseph! :)
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Date: 2/14/2018 6:39:00 AM
Excellent poem Joseph..I hear the message in your poem..delivered well with imagery of silent storm.
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Book: Shattered Sighs