a party

My sister made a party at beach,
For celebrating 40 years of wedding,
They keep everything simple,
Her children and grandsons were there,
Still shy and so little kids,
I was the photographer, I shot a lot,
I met my nephews and their wives,
We drunk homemade beer, good one,
And ate spaghettis bolognaises,
It is always too soon, to quit that kind of people.

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Date: 7/6/2024 9:12:00 PM
'Memories are made of this,' as the popular song goes. I enjoyed this tale of a blissfully happy day, spent with family. Great writing, Yann.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 7/7/2024 5:17:00 PM
thanks evelyn, sor the kind and appreciated comment, blessings
Date: 7/6/2024 8:40:00 AM
This is so sweet dear Yann and you get the real sense of just how cherished family time is when more memories can be made that bring such joy such as your poem did while reading and enjoying it. I expect you had great fun with the camera. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 7/7/2024 5:18:00 PM
thanks christina for the apprciated and warm comment, falily days are the best i think, blessings
Date: 6/29/2024 7:18:00 PM
This is really cute, Yann
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Yann Rolland
Date: 7/7/2024 5:19:00 PM
thanks andrea for reading
Date: 6/29/2024 5:05:00 AM
Being with family and the close ones is always a pleasure. Celebration of a wedding anniversary, though in a simple manner is a gratifying experience. Wish your sister a Happy Wedding Anniversary.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 7/7/2024 5:20:00 PM
thanks valsa for the warm comment, gratifying experience is a right word, blessings
Date: 6/28/2024 4:47:00 AM
Ahh!! Some people still make it a commitment for a lifetime in marriage which is wonderful. So good that you were there to share the celebration with them and got to enjoy all their family and get some snapshots. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/28/2024 5:22:00 PM
Thanks sara for the enjoyable comment, family is what keeps us alive after friends cheat on us have a sweet week end
Date: 6/24/2024 2:05:00 AM
So true. Hard to end a party when surrounded by friendly relatives and friends.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/24/2024 7:35:00 AM
thank you so much, victor, for the touching comment have a sweet monday
Date: 6/23/2024 1:18:00 PM
a lovely description of this party, yann! i especially like the last sentence and the way you've phrased it...
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/23/2024 4:34:00 PM
thank you so much Ilene, enjoyed your stopping by
Date: 6/23/2024 11:38:00 AM
Very nice.. sounds great.. I did not know you were a photographer..
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/23/2024 4:35:00 PM
thanks So, i am not a professionnal, but i have congrats for my photos, thanks for mentionning it
Date: 6/23/2024 2:08:00 AM
Its always nice when family gather together to celebrate and appreciate each other, such are the precious moments that will surely be cherished always. Pleasure reading your poem. Sending you and family light
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/23/2024 4:37:00 PM
thank you so much IE for the touching words and light for family yann
Date: 6/22/2024 8:00:00 PM
Its sounds like you made golden memories that day, thank you for sharing your talent, both in word and photography
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/23/2024 4:39:00 PM
thanks Rose, for stopping by, people were happy that i took photographies, specially my nephews for the 2 or 5 years old children , i tried to do something there, have a pleasant week
Date: 6/22/2024 7:55:00 PM
Sounds wonderful! We celebrated my granddaughter’s graduation today. A nice time with family!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/23/2024 4:40:00 PM
such a coincidence Kim, nice time indeed for everyone, take care
Date: 6/22/2024 7:31:00 PM
Glad you have a family for sharing with, enjoyed reading
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/23/2024 4:41:00 PM
Thanks a lot paige, for stopping by, your comment is not innocent, i was touched yann
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