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A Murder of Crows

Orange and flaming The redwood tree’s trunk in sparkling fires So many red barked knotted giants gone Leaves crinkled like fireplace paper Animals gone, squirrels and rabbits scorched Baby bears climbing and hiding in a few trees 945 houses gone no reason to stay No place to go, Oregon and Washington in flames Particles minuscule lay in the air But it is the quietness of the crows Creates a feeling of dread The large one, the one I know Who comes each morning A living early alarm demanding nuts Yesterday I saw him just sitting He sat on the fence post Staring at me as I washed dishes Quiet and watching as though He wants to know what have we done To his home, where are his children His murder of crows gone Where and why— still he stares He wants to know And so do I

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Date: 9/16/2020 2:17:00 AM
A truly poignant, frightening, real and eye opening piece of poetry Linda that hits home about the devestation and loss caused by the nightmare of fires. A very worthy 1st place in Brian's competition.
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Linda Milgate
Date: 9/16/2020 6:19:00 PM
Thank you a difficult time for so many. Crows still not showing up as before, just the big one. Wish he and I could talk!! Take care and thank you.
Date: 9/12/2020 1:57:00 AM
Powerful poem for a scary moment, Linda. Sad to see the feathered friend with ravaged absent family..... Ideal title and theme connection with group name. Your writing of this scenario is to be commended.
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Linda Milgate
Date: 9/12/2020 11:19:00 AM
today he came with one other crow, maybe more will return, the air is a little better today I think, so many small particles not sure. He stays for a very short time now. I pay attention to him as an indication of the air quality
Date: 9/11/2020 4:47:00 PM
Crows as a group are called a murder of crows, interesting name but that is what they are called. We have a small group nearby on a pine tree and then a. number of them easily 50 that have homes in nearby pine trees by a park. They are considered one of the most intelligent birds along with Parrots. Since the fires began I have not seen or heard them until that one day.
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