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First sight of fallen white virgin snow Tats lace patterns on window panes Grandma's breakfast stirs the house. Wood burning flames chatter In the old fireplace. Festive winter Children take In its Lace. Charm World cloak In loose flakes. Tinsel snowman, Red Birds rustle the Winter evergreens, and Denuded trees by the front Open porch greeting passersby. Sun melts deep, shadows seize a cold night. 12/20/2020 Double Nonet Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula

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Date: 1/29/2021 7:57:00 AM
Lovely poem, Eve ~
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Date: 1/2/2021 12:50:00 PM
Oh, such imagery--fresh, original, picture-making; I adore it. Your poem almost makes me look forward to winter. Very nice work, Eve. Hugs, Paul
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Date: 12/24/2020 8:17:00 AM
Vivid description highlighting wonders of winter joy and family love. congratulations on well deserved First Place.
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Date: 12/23/2020 2:39:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work. It makes me shiver to think of deep snow..Sara
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Date: 12/22/2020 7:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write and cute picture. I love red birds. Enjoy your win with blessings............
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Date: 12/21/2020 9:00:00 PM
Winter entering. So nice panorama. Congrats to win First Place
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Date: 12/21/2020 8:34:00 PM
What a stunning and vivid scenery. Neatly done! Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 12/21/2020 7:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Don't put too much ginger or pepper or cumin. Make and keep, warm, strain and drink full day. For cold and cough basil leaves work wonders. Put cut leaves boil till water becomes half. Drink. You will be up and running soon. Hugs. Rama
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Date: 12/21/2020 6:37:00 PM
Pleasantly appealing! Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Eve, my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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Date: 12/21/2020 5:09:00 PM
Here is a link to exercise you can try. Along with this also do Anulom Vilom exercise. https://youtu.be/91FICPE0_jA. Try it. Take care,Rama Put some grated ginger in water boil strain and drink. Keep it mild. You can also add whole cumin seeds and pepper powder. They help in digestion and cure cold :) merry Christmas and Happy New year
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/21/2020 5:26:00 PM
Wow, thank you, Rama, will do.. hugs Eve
Date: 12/21/2020 1:36:00 PM
Just beautiful with these winter images, Eve. Loved the last line, most important line of every good poem!
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Date: 12/21/2020 4:05:00 AM
I love this, Eve. It's B R I L L I A N T! A joy and inspiration. God bless you with a win
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Date: 12/21/2020 1:57:00 AM
I am so glad to be reading this poem. You did it so well. ~~
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Date: 12/20/2020 10:30:00 PM
Your poetry, so warm to the heart, yet subject matter, sends shivers down one's spine. Happy Christmas Eve to you and all of your family...
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