Wilt

W hen summer ends and a cool wind blows I n the garden there is just one rose L eft all alone in the cool of the day T he last rose of summer slowly fades away ~

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/9/2018 10:02:00 PM

Charming, Joseph. Congrats on your win.

Lu Loo

Date: 1/9/2018 7:45:00 AM

beautiful acrostic Joseph, congrats :) -luloo

Eve Roper

Date: 1/8/2018 10:56:00 PM

Beautiful imagery , Joseph,congratulations on your win.

Skat A

Date: 1/8/2018 10:04:00 AM

Very nice Joseph, Congratulations on your win. HUGS ~SKAT~

Joseph May
Date: 1/8/2018 2:35:00 PM

Thank you for my placement Linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/5/2016 4:37:00 PM

In < ten lines you have created magic with this winner…Way to go poet friend..Congrats on you being in the winners’ list..Sara

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/5/2016 8:25:00 AM

A 7 for another winning poem! Joseph, this is so beautiful! Janice

Andrew Battaglino

Date: 10/5/2016 8:22:00 AM

Beautiful. Congrats Joseph, Andy

Lu Loo

Date: 10/5/2016 7:40:00 AM

beautifully flowing and full of grace Joseph...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Jan Allison

Date: 10/5/2016 3:17:00 AM

Many congrats on your top spot Jospeh - a beautiful flow to your rhyming acrostic:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2013 3:55:00 PM

I like the word you used Joseph,,, congrats..Linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2013 1:44:00 PM

Ahhh!!! Creative winning work..Congrats on you win..Thanks for your visit to my page today..Sara

Skat A

Date: 9/1/2013 2:00:00 PM

Joseph, , congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ Skat

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/1/2013 1:46:00 PM

This is very good, Joseph! Congrats on your win with this lovely acrostic! Love, Kim

Donna Jones

Date: 9/1/2013 8:08:00 AM

Congratulations Joseph....enjoyed reading this again....

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/31/2013 8:12:00 PM

beautifully written, congrats on your win :)

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 8/31/2013 7:51:00 PM

Big congrats Joseph! Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2013 5:43:00 PM

I love how you took a situation like a rose wilting to SHOW us the meaning of wilt. VERY nice job. And I love that you took the time to rhyme. Congratulations.

Joseph May
Date: 8/31/2013 7:19:00 PM

thank you Andrera...I actually did 2 poems..the other word was not pretty...hugs