Joseph May Poet Acrostic

Wilt

W hen summer ends and a cool wind blows

     I n the garden there is just one rose

     L eft all alone  in the cool of the day

     T he last rose of summer slowly fades away
                                           ~

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Line Gauthier January 9, 2018 at 10:02 PM Charming, Joseph. Congrats on your win.

Beautiful Scars January 9, 2018 at 7:45 AM beautiful acrostic Joseph, congrats :) -luloo

Eve Roper January 8, 2018 at 10:56 PM Beautiful imagery , Joseph,congratulations on your win.

Skat A January 8, 2018 at 10:04 AM Very nice Joseph, Congratulations on your win. HUGS ~SKAT~ Joseph May January 8, 2018 at 2:35 PM Thank you for my placement Linda

Sara Kendrick October 5, 2016 at 4:37 PM In < ten lines you have created magic with this winner…Way to go poet friend..Congrats on you being in the winners’ list..Sara

Janice Canerdy October 5, 2016 at 8:25 AM A 7 for another winning poem! Joseph, this is so beautiful! Janice

Andrew Battaglino October 5, 2016 at 8:22 AM Beautiful. Congrats Joseph, Andy

Beautiful Scars October 5, 2016 at 7:40 AM beautifully flowing and full of grace Joseph...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Jan Allison October 5, 2016 at 3:17 AM Many congrats on your top spot Jospeh - a beautiful flow to your rhyming acrostic:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A September 5, 2013 at 3:55 PM I like the word you used Joseph,,, congrats..Linda

Sara Kendrick September 5, 2013 at 1:44 PM Ahhh!!! Creative winning work..Congrats on you win..Thanks for your visit to my page today..Sara

Skat A September 1, 2013 at 2:00 PM Joseph, , congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ Skat

Kim Merryman September 1, 2013 at 1:46 PM This is very good, Joseph! Congrats on your win with this lovely acrostic! Love, Kim

Donna Jones September 1, 2013 at 8:08 AM Congratulations Joseph....enjoyed reading this again....

Sandra Adams August 31, 2013 at 8:12 PM beautifully written, congrats on your win :)

Cecilia Macfarlane August 31, 2013 at 7:51 PM Big congrats Joseph! Hugs

Andrea Dietrich August 31, 2013 at 5:43 PM I love how you took a situation like a rose wilting to SHOW us the meaning of wilt. VERY nice job. And I love that you took the time to rhyme. Congratulations. Joseph May August 31, 2013 at 7:19 PM thank you Andrera...I actually did 2 poems..the other word was not pretty...hugs

Kim Van Breda August 26, 2013 at 6:58 AM What a beautiful way to depict the end of summers flowering beauties-- your Acrostic does it well..

Shadow Hamilton August 24, 2013 at 6:28 PM well captured joseph gl in contest Shadow x smile

Donna Jones August 24, 2013 at 11:46 AM A very good one Joseph!!!!!! :-) Joseph May August 24, 2013 at 12:28 PM thank you Donna