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Looking for the right angel for Gabby

In its winter of gray steel ice gloom and doom A scream from an owl keeps me cold and shaking with fear Mysterious silver moonlight A voice no one hears with a desperate desire Sounds like an infant groan The silence falls, winter white the forgotten prospect I fly away with downy wings 07.01.2019 Sun :) A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 2/4/2019 6:45:00 AM
Wow!!! A beautiful write, Sunshine.. Mystical and exquiste, my friend.. The pic. Is beautiful as well.. A fav for me!! Have a blessed day..
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Date: 2/5/2019 1:30:00 PM
- Robertina, many thanks for the great comment a fave and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/2/2019 7:07:00 PM
Imagery is vivid. With a mysterious veil of gray Flying away with downy wings into silver moonlight, a gentle way to go. Darkly beautiful, Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/5/2019 1:29:00 PM
- Many thanks for the great comment and visit, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2019 10:43:00 AM
A beautiful wintry write. Have a lovely day today but getting cold tomorrow. Hope you are having a good winter. Not very much snow this year which is good for getting around. love phyl
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Date: 1/14/2019 12:15:00 PM
- A little snow ... and ice cold wind / storm here with me today, dear friend :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - Glad you liked it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/11/2019 1:23:00 PM
I like the prospect of flying away on downy wings, May I join your Sunshine, I can use a little heaven too xo
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Date: 1/14/2019 12:13:00 PM
- You are welcome to join, Pixie :) - Many thanks, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/11/2019 12:28:00 PM
HI Sunshine Smile, Your illustration is awesome, I agree with Warren, and your poem is ghostly grey, exactly what you wanted to portray, which you did - an incredible poem - kudos, Poetry hugs, Jennifer. .
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Date: 1/14/2019 12:11:00 PM
- Hi Jennifer :) .... always nice to see you, I greatly appreciate your comment :) - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/11/2019 10:36:00 AM
Anne-Lise you never fail to amaze me. This is brilliant at so many levels and your photograph choice is perfect, Warmest Wishes and a BIG HUG coming your way~ Warren
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Date: 1/14/2019 12:09:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Warren :) - Glad you liked it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/11/2019 9:20:00 AM
Nicely done, Sunshine.Hugs Eve~`*
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Date: 1/14/2019 12:08:00 PM
- Many thanks Eve, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/11/2019 4:10:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, I found this write to be dark, mysterious and lovely at the same time. Well done:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/14/2019 12:07:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/10/2019 2:07:00 PM
Lovely Anne-Lise...
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Date: 1/10/2019 2:14:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/10/2019 8:03:00 AM
Soar with the snowflakes, Anne-Lise. Lovely write. Hugs :) Charlie
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Date: 1/10/2019 2:11:00 PM
- Thank you for your lovely comment, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/9/2019 9:34:00 PM
such beautiful and inspiring poetry!
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Date: 1/10/2019 2:11:00 PM
- Thank you for your lovely comment, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/9/2019 7:42:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, such a mysterious write. Such a wonderful content. Your words paint strong onto the canvas of my mind. Such a deep write. Your creativity shines with this excellent poetic gem Anne-Lise. A fave. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 1/9/2019 8:10:00 AM
- Thank you for visiting, lovely comment and the fave, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/9/2019 5:54:00 AM
A dark and wintry write Anne..Nicely written..
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Date: 1/9/2019 7:33:00 AM
- Thank you Joseph, for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/8/2019 4:00:00 PM
Love this profound poetry, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 1/9/2019 7:32:00 AM
- Thank you for visiting and lovely comment, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/7/2019 6:16:00 PM
how mystical; i like this, anne...happy huggs
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Date: 1/9/2019 7:31:00 AM
- Thank you for visiting and lovely comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/7/2019 4:20:00 PM
mysterious and very cool, anne-lise!
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Date: 1/9/2019 7:30:00 AM
- Thank you Ilene, for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/7/2019 3:22:00 PM
Wow, very nicely written Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/9/2019 7:30:00 AM
- Thank you for visiting and lovely comment, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/7/2019 3:15:00 PM
This is very deep.. Seems like a person touch to this..
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Date: 1/9/2019 7:29:00 AM
- Thank you S.O., for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/7/2019 2:14:00 PM
You painted her portrait well...a silent discourse of her mind..well written, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 1/9/2019 7:29:00 AM
- Thank you for visiting and lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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