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- Whisper Goodbye -

In its winter of gray steel ice

                                           gloom and doom

                                        A scream from an owl

                                            keeps me cold

                                         and shaking with fear

                                    Mysterious silver moonlight

                                         A voice no one hears

                                        with a desperate desire

                                     Sounds like an infant groan

                                    The silence falls, winter white

                                        the forgotten prospect

                                    I fly away with downy wings









07.01.2019
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Robertina B. Date: 2/4/2019 6:45:00 AM Wow!!! A beautiful write, Sunshine.. Mystical and exquiste, my friend.. The pic. Is beautiful as well.. A fav for me!! Have a blessed day.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/5/2019 1:30:00 PM - Robertina, many thanks for the great comment a fave and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra L. Weiss Date: 2/2/2019 7:07:00 PM Imagery is vivid. With a mysterious veil of gray Flying away with downy wings into silver moonlight, a gentle way to go. Darkly beautiful, Anne-Lise Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/5/2019 1:29:00 PM - Many thanks for the great comment and visit, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock Date: 1/14/2019 10:43:00 AM A beautiful wintry write. Have a lovely day today but getting cold tomorrow. Hope you are having a good winter. Not very much snow this year which is good for getting around. love phyl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2019 12:15:00 PM - A little snow ... and ice cold wind / storm here with me today, dear friend :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - Glad you liked it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 1/11/2019 1:23:00 PM I like the prospect of flying away on downy wings, May I join your Sunshine, I can use a little heaven too xo Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2019 12:13:00 PM - You are welcome to join, Pixie :) - Many thanks, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 1/11/2019 12:28:00 PM HI Sunshine Smile, Your illustration is awesome, I agree with Warren, and your poem is ghostly grey, exactly what you wanted to portray, which you did - an incredible poem - kudos, Poetry hugs, Jennifer. . Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2019 12:11:00 PM - Hi Jennifer :) .... always nice to see you, I greatly appreciate your comment :) - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll Date: 1/11/2019 10:36:00 AM Anne-Lise you never fail to amaze me. This is brilliant at so many levels and your photograph choice is perfect, Warmest Wishes and a BIG HUG coming your way~ Warren Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2019 12:09:00 PM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Warren :) - Glad you liked it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 1/11/2019 9:20:00 AM Nicely done, Sunshine.Hugs Eve~`* Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2019 12:08:00 PM - Many thanks Eve, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. Date: 1/11/2019 4:10:00 AM Hi Anne-Lise, I found this write to be dark, mysterious and lovely at the same time. Well done:-) Alexis Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2019 12:07:00 PM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith Date: 1/10/2019 2:07:00 PM Lovely Anne-Lise... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/10/2019 2:14:00 PM - Thank you very much, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina Date: 1/10/2019 8:03:00 AM Soar with the snowflakes, Anne-Lise. Lovely write. Hugs :) Charlie Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/10/2019 2:11:00 PM - Thank you for your lovely comment, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso Date: 1/9/2019 9:34:00 PM such beautiful and inspiring poetry! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/10/2019 2:11:00 PM - Thank you for your lovely comment, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven Date: 1/9/2019 7:42:00 AM Hi Anne-Lise, such a mysterious write. Such a wonderful content. Your words paint strong onto the canvas of my mind. Such a deep write. Your creativity shines with this excellent poetic gem Anne-Lise. A fave. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/9/2019 8:10:00 AM - Thank you for visiting, lovely comment and the fave, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 1/9/2019 5:54:00 AM A dark and wintry write Anne..Nicely written.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/9/2019 7:33:00 AM - Thank you Joseph, for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman Date: 1/8/2019 4:00:00 PM Love this profound poetry, Anne-Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/9/2019 7:32:00 AM - Thank you for visiting and lovely comment, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/7/2019 6:16:00 PM how mystical; i like this, anne...happy huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/9/2019 7:31:00 AM - Thank you for visiting and lovely comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer Date: 1/7/2019 4:20:00 PM mysterious and very cool, anne-lise! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/9/2019 7:30:00 AM - Thank you Ilene, for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands Date: 1/7/2019 3:22:00 PM Wow, very nicely written Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/9/2019 7:30:00 AM - Thank you for visiting and lovely comment, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One Date: 1/7/2019 3:15:00 PM This is very deep.. Seems like a person touch to this.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/9/2019 7:29:00 AM - Thank you S.O., for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/7/2019 2:14:00 PM You painted her portrait well...a silent discourse of her mind..well written, Anne-Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/9/2019 7:29:00 AM - Thank you for visiting and lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)