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raining buckets!

I'm looking for a scarlet flower and summer It just never stop raining No sunshine to light my way Wipes away my soul and hope Drops that sharply cry and scream Growing darkness makes me sad Lightning flashes on steel gray sky Oh ... do not forget me, my heart is yours Where is the summer that I dream about ? June is almost over, did I ask for too much ? 25.06.2017 (unrhymed couplets) Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Funom Makama

Date: 7/4/2017 9:00:00 AM

Oh my goodness! This is why I always miss your work when I stay away from this site for a while. Your choice of words and perfect blend of a cute message is beyond description. This is definitely good..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/4/2017 11:44:00 AM

- My words are just a little drop in the ocean ... after a storm they're gone, Funom :) - Many thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman

Date: 7/3/2017 7:38:00 PM

A little sad Anne-Lise "...and July soon follows as the days of our lives tick slowly past and we wait for the sunshine to smile again upon us. Waiting, waiting while droplets, as do tears, wet our checks but we know our Sunshine Smile will be there as we turn the page and she will know that she could never be forgotten for her words are the brightness that fills our world." Your poem is lovely, may your July be filled with beautiful rainbows.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/4/2017 11:38:00 AM

- Many beautiful words James, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - I cross my fingers for a little warmer July :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams

Date: 7/1/2017 7:26:00 AM

Fingers crossed for you Anne-Lise nothing worse then it bucketing down when all you want is a little heat and sunshine. Loved your poem. We had our fair share of rain two weeks ago....Maria

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/4/2017 11:41:00 AM

- After a long and dark winter ... my body needs sun and heat, Maria :) - Many thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 6/30/2017 4:27:00 PM

The whole spring rained and thank God June is ending with a beautiful sunshine :) I appreciate the rain but I'm glad the sun is out and shine :) beautiful piece Miss Anne-Lise. Hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/4/2017 11:40:00 AM

- Many people need rain ... we've got too much, Akkina :) - Many thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

Date: 6/29/2017 5:45:00 AM

Our June was not so bad this year. My sister was visiting from Australia. She rang her husband there and he said he had emptied the wheelbarrow three times in the space of just one downfall.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/29/2017 2:48:00 PM

- A terrible rainfall, Jean - Many thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 6/28/2017 11:27:00 AM

Beautifully done , Anne-Lise Every season has a reason.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/28/2017 2:51:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and comments, Ralph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/27/2017 7:04:00 PM

Elegant, Sunshine ~*

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/28/2017 2:50:00 PM

- Eve, many thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/27/2017 4:51:00 PM

How sad, Anne-Lise! Over here we have excess heat and fine weather, while you still soak in rain! Perhaps we can reach an agreement and do some bartering:) Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/28/2017 2:50:00 PM

- Paul, many thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 6/27/2017 3:32:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this gem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/28/2017 2:49:00 PM

Many thanks for friendly visits and comments, Afolabi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Old Man Emu

Date: 6/27/2017 2:51:00 PM

We always ask for too much when it comes to the weather, nicely penned (feel your pain) Regards, Craig

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/28/2017 2:49:00 PM

Many thanks for friendly visits and comments, Craig :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 6/27/2017 1:46:00 PM

A summer day drenched in rain..Very nicely penned Anne...hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/28/2017 2:47:00 PM

- Joseph, many thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/27/2017 1:40:00 PM

You possess a beautiful great heart, so it's very simple for you to ask. Excellently done my lovely dear friend. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/28/2017 2:47:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and comments, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/26/2017 5:21:00 PM

sending some sunshine and a smile your way Anne Lise - a month of rain is just like many British summers:-( We have rain set all week but on a positive note I don't have to water the garden! I LOVE the fuchsia's in the picture I have them in my hanging baskets!:-) hugs Jan x

Jan Allison
Date: 6/27/2017 2:56:00 PM

Today we have had almost a month's rain in a day - my fuchsia's are in need of scuba diving equipment:-( hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/27/2017 3:02:00 AM

- No, the flowers do not need watering ... they drowning because they do not have fins :) - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan

Date: 6/26/2017 8:14:00 AM

Beautifully expressed Anne...Don't worry,the sun will shine soon...But we are expecting rain here as the summer is too hot to handle...Today's temperature(38 C).I will send sunshine and you please send rain...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/26/2017 8:20:00 AM

- 38 C is too much, Supraja :) ... 20 to 24 C is enough for me :) - Sending you with pleasure a little rain :) - Many thanks and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/26/2017 12:47:00 AM

No, Anne-lise, not at all, the clouds will pass away soon and you will see the sun shining, spreading a smile on your lovely face :) beautiful write, sometimes rain can make us gloomy, but don't worry, the sun is just hiding :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/26/2017 5:19:00 AM

- New rain record, Jo :( - 26 rain days so far in June :( - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/25/2017 5:03:00 PM

No my friend, Anne-Lise you have not asked for to much, you asked for the summer to be on time and this is fair! Well, I am not all powerful to make your wish come true BUT I can keep sending you flowers from my garden til you have your own! Your poem is sad but delightful ! I heard that summer is around the corner! Its is a secret...Haha! Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/26/2017 5:16:00 AM

- There has been rainfall every day in June, this has not happened in 65 years (1952) - Many thanks and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lin Lane

Date: 6/25/2017 2:33:00 PM

I love the rain, but a month of it is a titch too much. The sun lives within your smile and your words, for those of us who read your poetry.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/25/2017 2:37:00 PM

- I do not need all this rain Lin, I share with pleasure with you :) - Many thanks and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham

Date: 6/25/2017 9:27:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise , somethings we just have no control off , great write and if the sun :))))hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/25/2017 12:16:00 PM

- If I could decide, Niall :))) .... it would be a great summer :))) - Many thanks and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/25/2017 9:23:00 AM

Summer is here in the south. Your poem is so sad, Anne Lise. How about if we trade, you can have the sun for a while and we'll take the rain:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/25/2017 12:14:00 PM

- I do not need much heat, Daniel ... but, NOT more rain - It's almost rained all month ... and I'm happy when the sun is shining :) - Some people have too much sun and some have too little ... it's unfair and bad divided - Kind of you who want to exchange with me <3 - hugs & thank // Anne-Lise :)

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 6/25/2017 8:33:00 AM

So sad yet so beautiful! Huglets and sunny rays ~ john

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/25/2017 8:42:00 AM

- Glad you liked it, John :) - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 6/25/2017 8:29:00 AM

I will send you a cup of sunshine... beautiful and full of longing

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/25/2017 8:37:00 AM

- Just a cup, Tim ... I need a whole bucket !!! - Many thanks and hugs // Anne-Lise :)