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' Tears of a Candle - Ceasing '

*-* ~~~~~ *-* ~~~~~ *-* ~~~~~ jun-jun villanueva
~~~~~ x_x ~~~~~ *-* ~~~~~ teardrops emanate from within inner bane, anguish perforatin' space for vigour devoured by pain driblets of tears pour like incessant dewdrops of rain melancholy cuddled my psyche's being whinging flashbacks juxtaposed - reminiscing nightmares, incubuses in tight sleep bedtime death comes, humming lyrical requiem in rhyme dreams swallow me with fear - exasperate like ceasing ... expiring ...it's a fate now, crying ...bemoaning ... myriad tears fell reverberates like infant thrown to hell. ======================================== *-* "SOUNDS OF A CRY" contest

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Date: 8/4/2011 10:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Michael's "Sound Of A Cry" contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2011 8:44:00 AM
Well done with your win my friend blessings Paul
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Date: 8/4/2011 4:33:00 AM
Many Congrats on your 2nd place win. Well deserved!
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Date: 8/4/2011 3:45:00 AM
hey jun-jun, congrats on your win, David
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Date: 8/4/2011 12:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Nice work
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:37:00 PM
Words spring from you. congratulations on lyour ig win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:14:00 PM
You are always so imaginative the way you paint with your words jun-jun, congrats on your excellent 2nd place win! :)
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:05:00 PM
congrats jun-jun on your super second place with this brilliant beauty luv..so honored to be sharing placement with u luv..
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Date: 8/1/2011 10:11:00 PM
Very powerful and filled with emotion! Wow!
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Date: 7/31/2011 11:58:00 AM
sorrowful and soulful tone to this piece jun-jun luv.. most touching deep into the heart when reading ..good luck in the contest ... an awesome parallel on the theme...
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Date: 7/31/2011 11:34:00 AM
splendid reflections filled with moving emotion... win and go, jun! :) huggs, nette
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