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Summer set the dewy grass Through my castle I pass The sweet scent of the flowers Bare feet dancing in the showers 08.06.2018 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved When A Fourth Line Helps It To Rhyme! Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One 2nd place in the contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2018 10:19:00 AM

Short and so sweet. Congrats on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/16/2018 1:57:00 PM

- Many thanks for your congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/14/2018 8:53:00 PM

Wonderful rhyming write, Sunshine !:-) Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~’*

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/15/2018 4:11:00 AM

- Many thanks Eve, for your friendly congratulations and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/13/2018 2:29:00 PM

Need more rain to dance in the shower. Lovely poem. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/13/2018 2:57:00 PM

- We've had beautiful weather the last four weeks ... and we need some rain now :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/13/2018 1:52:00 PM

A pleasure to be back with deserved congratulations, Anne-Lise! Well done:) Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/13/2018 1:55:00 PM

- Many thanks for your congratulations, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/13/2018 10:17:00 AM

A wonderful fourth line, making this a wonderful poem -- written by a wonderful poet! Kudos on your wonderful win! :) Wacky Wolf

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/13/2018 12:50:00 PM

- Many thanks for your congratulations, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 6/13/2018 10:16:00 AM

Congrats on your win Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/13/2018 12:49:00 PM

- Many thanks for your congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett

Date: 6/13/2018 9:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Anne-Lise, beautifully written. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/13/2018 12:49:00 PM

- Many thanks for your congratulations, Roy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/13/2018 8:42:00 AM

I'm back to say CONGRATS, Anne-Lise! Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/13/2018 12:48:00 PM

- Many thanks for your congratulations, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/13/2018 7:29:00 AM

Congratulations for your win Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/13/2018 12:48:00 PM

- Many thanks for your congratulations, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 6/13/2018 7:02:00 AM

Sounds lovely.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/13/2018 12:47:00 PM

- Many thanks for my place on your winning list, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/13/2018 6:58:00 AM

Back with congratulations sunshine. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/13/2018 12:47:00 PM

- Many thanks for your congratulations, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 6/13/2018 5:59:00 AM

Sweet little summer poem; I like the simplicity.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/13/2018 7:04:00 AM

- Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment, Agnes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Swartz

Date: 6/11/2018 9:21:00 PM

Great imagery. As you pass through your castle and get your feet wet in the rain. We don't get much rain here in the desert so I'm usually walking on hot sand. Wondrful poem Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/12/2018 1:39:00 PM

- Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/11/2018 8:17:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender..Way to go. We have that dew upon the grass this morning but no raindrops after hours of thunder and lightning going around us last night. Thanks for dropping by.Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2018 8:24:00 AM

- It has been very unusually hot for several weeks ... now the weather changes ... I think there will be thunder here too ... I do not like it - Many thanks for your visit and nice comment, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/10/2018 11:44:00 PM

You always pick the best photos and write the best poems, nice ensemble dear poetess.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2018 1:44:00 AM

- I greatly appreciate your visit and comment ... many thanks Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/10/2018 8:05:00 PM

Delightful and invigorating, Sunshine! Love it. Sure to do well in the contest. Hugs, carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2018 1:43:00 AM

- Many thanks, Carolyn :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 6/10/2018 6:18:00 PM

An awesome refreshing verse Ann-Lise; made me smile!~Che :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2018 1:42:00 AM

- Glad it gave you a smile, Cheryl :) - Many thanks for your visit and nice comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Haley Fisher

Date: 6/10/2018 4:38:00 PM

I really enjoyed your poem. Playful dancing in the rain. Made me smile.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2018 1:41:00 AM

- Glad it gave you a smile, Haley :) - Many thanks for your visit and nice comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/10/2018 3:23:00 PM

ohh, a joyful dance in the rain, anne.. let's go!... marvelous mood and happy huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2018 1:40:00 AM

- Nette, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/10/2018 12:30:00 PM

This is so lovely, Anne-Lise! Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2018 1:39:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and nice comment, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ricky Muse

Date: 6/10/2018 12:20:00 PM

The symbolism and brevity of this poem mesh nicely.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/10/2018 12:25:00 PM

- Many thanks, Richard :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/9/2018 5:23:00 PM

It would be a real joy to be barefooted dancing in the rain, Anne-Lise! I believe your ideal castle would be a large open field filled with colorful, fragrant flowers! ~ I also love the accompanying picture in which bright yellow takes pride of place. Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/10/2018 6:53:00 AM

- I do not want a giant castle, Paul - My dreams are not big .... a tiny, tiny "castle" with a small beautiful quiet garden :))) - But dancing barefoot in the grass is wonderful :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)