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- Summer Shower -

Summer set the dewy grass

                            Through my castle I pass

                         The sweet scent of the flowers

                        Bare feet dancing in the showers
















08.06.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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When A Fourth Line Helps It To Rhyme! Poetry Contest
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2nd place in the contest

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/16/2018 10:19:00 AM Short and so sweet. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/16/2018 1:57:00 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 6/14/2018 8:53:00 PM Wonderful rhyming write, Sunshine !:-) Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~’* Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/15/2018 4:11:00 AM - Many thanks Eve, for your friendly congratulations and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock Date: 6/13/2018 2:29:00 PM Need more rain to dance in the shower. Lovely poem. love phyl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/13/2018 2:57:00 PM - We've had beautiful weather the last four weeks ... and we need some rain now :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus Date: 6/13/2018 1:52:00 PM A pleasure to be back with deserved congratulations, Anne-Lise! Well done:) Hugs // paul Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/13/2018 1:55:00 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 6/13/2018 10:17:00 AM A wonderful fourth line, making this a wonderful poem -- written by a wonderful poet! Kudos on your wonderful win! :) Wacky Wolf Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/13/2018 12:50:00 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 6/13/2018 10:16:00 AM Congrats on your win Anne Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/13/2018 12:49:00 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett Date: 6/13/2018 9:39:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Anne-Lise, beautifully written. :)) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/13/2018 12:49:00 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Roy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy Date: 6/13/2018 8:42:00 AM I'm back to say CONGRATS, Anne-Lise! Janice Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/13/2018 12:48:00 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands Date: 6/13/2018 7:29:00 AM Congratulations for your win Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/13/2018 12:48:00 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One Date: 6/13/2018 7:02:00 AM Sounds lovely.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/13/2018 12:47:00 PM - Many thanks for my place on your winning list, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 6/13/2018 6:58:00 AM Back with congratulations sunshine. Tom Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/13/2018 12:47:00 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Agnes Krampe Date: 6/13/2018 5:59:00 AM Sweet little summer poem; I like the simplicity. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/13/2018 7:04:00 AM - Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment, Agnes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Swartz Date: 6/11/2018 9:21:00 PM Great imagery. As you pass through your castle and get your feet wet in the rain. We don't get much rain here in the desert so I'm usually walking on hot sand. Wondrful poem Anne-Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/12/2018 1:39:00 PM - Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/11/2018 8:17:00 AM Enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender..Way to go. We have that dew upon the grass this morning but no raindrops after hours of thunder and lightning going around us last night. Thanks for dropping by.Sara Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/11/2018 8:24:00 AM - It has been very unusually hot for several weeks ... now the weather changes ... I think there will be thunder here too ... I do not like it - Many thanks for your visit and nice comment, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 6/10/2018 11:44:00 PM You always pick the best photos and write the best poems, nice ensemble dear poetess. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/11/2018 1:44:00 AM - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment ... many thanks Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/10/2018 8:05:00 PM Delightful and invigorating, Sunshine! Love it. Sure to do well in the contest. Hugs, carolyn Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/11/2018 1:43:00 AM - Many thanks, Carolyn :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman Date: 6/10/2018 6:18:00 PM An awesome refreshing verse Ann-Lise; made me smile!~Che :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/11/2018 1:42:00 AM - Glad it gave you a smile, Cheryl :) - Many thanks for your visit and nice comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Haley Fisher Date: 6/10/2018 4:38:00 PM I really enjoyed your poem. Playful dancing in the rain. Made me smile. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/11/2018 1:41:00 AM - Glad it gave you a smile, Haley :) - Many thanks for your visit and nice comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/10/2018 3:23:00 PM ohh, a joyful dance in the rain, anne.. let's go!... marvelous mood and happy huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/11/2018 1:40:00 AM - Nette, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy Date: 6/10/2018 12:30:00 PM This is so lovely, Anne-Lise! Janice Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/11/2018 1:39:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit and nice comment, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ricky Muse Date: 6/10/2018 12:20:00 PM The symbolism and brevity of this poem mesh nicely. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/10/2018 12:25:00 PM - Many thanks, Richard :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus Date: 6/9/2018 5:23:00 PM It would be a real joy to be barefooted dancing in the rain, Anne-Lise! I believe your ideal castle would be a large open field filled with colorful, fragrant flowers! ~ I also love the accompanying picture in which bright yellow takes pride of place. Hugs // paul Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/10/2018 6:53:00 AM - I do not want a giant castle, Paul - My dreams are not big .... a tiny, tiny "castle" with a small beautiful quiet garden :))) - But dancing barefoot in the grass is wonderful :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid Date: 6/9/2018 2:31:00 PM it must be fresh warm rain smiling wishing you a blessed weekend dear friend Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/10/2018 6:47:00 AM - Yes, warm summer rain Liam :) - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pashang Salehi Date: 6/9/2018 1:48:00 PM I must learn how to dance in the rain... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/10/2018 6:45:00 AM - Easy to dance in the rain, Pashang ... you get the rhythm of the rain :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 6/9/2018 1:12:00 PM A lovely write Anne..hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/9/2018 1:14:00 PM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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