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Fear Builds Walls - Pink Floyd's The Wall by JohnArvid

Do not let this superficial world discourage you Whoever cares often causes a dialogue with themselves How much of the content in mind is defined by the question ; "Imagine if ... what then ..." Echo in the head ... over and over again Night without sleep steals your energy Dead orchids and dark forces The battle between good and evil is just begun "Imagine if ... what then ..." 30.01.2017 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 2/14/2017 2:40:00 PM
truly awesome and awe inspiring, so to the point, yes it resonates
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/15/2017 3:43:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/10/2017 5:56:00 PM
Beautiful wisdom in this interesting verse...we must stay true to our realest authentic selves! Always a pleasure stopping by to read some of your work! You're an uplifting poet with a lot to say! Always, Laura
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Date: 2/11/2017 6:16:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and your comments, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/5/2017 9:46:00 AM
I do hope the young generation read these poem often. A good idea would be to publish your such poems as a legacy to youth! Well expressed and the truth! :)
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Date: 2/5/2017 12:00:00 PM
- I'm glad that you read my poem, Sunita :) - Thanks for friendly visits and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/5/2017 9:12:00 AM
Dear One Anne-Lise, Brilliant, philosophically succinct, and absolutely to the point. Accentuate the positive always, and focus not on the negative. I like this poem!! Best Always, Gary
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/5/2017 11:57:00 AM
- A wall around each country ... what earn we on that ... hate and enemies ... - Build a giant high wall around the White House ... no entry ... no exit - Thanks Gary, for friendly visits and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/1/2017 1:21:00 PM
I see my self turning over and over and asking questions. I guess we will have to wait and see as times are sure changing fast. love phyl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2017 1:57:00 PM
- I think I've seen enough ... just on a short time :) - Dear Phyllis, thanks for friendly visits and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/31/2017 12:09:00 PM
Can't remember the last time I read a poem three times. Point made... Brilliant Anne-Lise.
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Date: 1/31/2017 2:04:00 PM
- Luckily .... only thirteen short lines :))) - Thanks for friendly visits and your comments, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/31/2017 11:30:00 AM
A nice fine poem that leaves us pondering. Poetic questions asked wow. Ths world seems superficial sometimes yeah. Thumbs up lovely fellow poetess.
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Date: 1/31/2017 2:01:00 PM
- Zaynab, thanks for friendly visits and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/31/2017 8:38:00 AM
You are right, but it's sometimes so hard not to, especially when you are anxious.
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Date: 1/31/2017 2:00:00 PM
- Thanks for friendly visits and your comments, Darren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/31/2017 8:37:00 AM
A wise and thought provoking write, Anne-lise:) but I believe "the battle" has been going on even from before the creation of the world:)
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Date: 1/31/2017 2:00:00 PM
- Many battles .... won and lost - But with other weapons, Jo - Thanks for friendly visits and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/31/2017 8:31:00 AM
Love those last lines. Absolutely ... what then?
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Date: 1/31/2017 1:58:00 PM
- I do not think we have to wait so long before we will see the answer, Scott - Thanks for friendly visits and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/31/2017 7:03:00 AM
So true sunshine... Thought provoking write... A big 7...
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Date: 1/31/2017 8:16:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits a 7 and your comments, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/30/2017 4:06:00 PM
A very insightful and wise poem, Anne-Lise. I love the existential questions posed. This poem makes you think. A 7 and a fave. Double combo for this sweet treat. Outstanding write. Love and peace to you always.
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Date: 1/31/2017 3:47:00 AM
- Freddie, dangerous signals all over the world and cause divisions, questions, fear and hatred - This we can not accept ! - Thanks for friendly visits a 7 + fav. and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/30/2017 3:29:00 PM
The battle of good and evil never stops, Anne-Lise. We must remain diligent:)
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Date: 1/31/2017 3:25:00 AM
- Some people have too much "power" ... it can be stopped - One signature on a document, can destroy the world Daniel - - We can not close our eyes and just look at the madness - Thanks for friendly visits and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/30/2017 3:14:00 PM
a very interesting one, Sunshine! Provocative.
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Date: 1/31/2017 3:26:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and your comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/30/2017 2:28:00 PM
yes, we need to ask and do something to create world harmony.. beautiful, anne.. happy huggs
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Date: 1/30/2017 2:37:00 PM
- Together we are strong, Nette :) - Thanks for friendly visits and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/30/2017 2:19:00 PM
What if we all agreed to stop wars and to eliminate hatred...what then? We would have a perfect world! Well my friend, Anne-Lise your writing is something that inspires. Very well done! Hugs xx
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Date: 1/30/2017 2:32:00 PM
- It is hate and war which destroy our world ... with love we can all share this earth ... and, yes "a perfect world" my friend - Thanks for friendly visits and your interesting comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/30/2017 2:11:00 PM
Yes, it is sometimes so difficult to stay in the moment, yet so important. Good one. :)
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Date: 1/30/2017 2:17:00 PM
- Sometimes we think too much ... :))) - Thanks for friendly visits and your comments, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/30/2017 1:18:00 PM
Lovely and meaningful A-L...a true 7
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Date: 1/30/2017 2:01:00 PM
- Tim, thanks for friendly visits a 7 and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/30/2017 1:16:00 PM
So wonderfully said Anne-Lise. We have got to seek out the positives each day and leave the negative thoughts in the past. So many lose sleep worrying about things that they really have no control over.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/30/2017 2:04:00 PM
- No, no control ... it's true, Chris ... - Do not destroy the beauty sleep :) - Thanks for friendly visits and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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