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Spock will be born January 6, 2230 He has no sons or daughters Blood type: T-negative T-negative is a rare vulcanic blood type Until now it has been difficult to find a blood donor A fantasy world ... a "kick" A game behind a hard plaster mask It's not only about dragons or elves Is the universe and life a simulation? By pressing the Y button, you enter the magic mode Spock will die on "New Vulcan" in 2263 You manipulate the game using the A and X buttons ... at the expense of others 03.04.2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 11/25/2019 10:04:00 AM
love your poem, Anne-Lise, the emotions are strong and I can't blame you, he has always been very good with me.. maybe this time will be different … hugs sweet lady
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/25/2019 11:53:00 AM
... one day ... elephants might fly with their own wings, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)  
Date: 6/19/2019 7:34:00 PM
That is a very imaginative poem. I like the topic you chose using both Star Trek's favorite character in my opinion and the question of life as a reality or illusion that has been created for us. Maybe it is a lot of both at the same time for us here and now? Keep writing more like this one please!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/9/2019 12:30:00 PM
- A reality or an illusion ... sometimes I really wonder, Brian :) - Many thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/24/2019 11:11:00 AM
what a pit of vipers...
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Date: 4/25/2019 12:22:00 PM
.... no reason for tears, Lady L - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2019 3:06:00 AM
- The mouse went in the trap ... "Son of Spock" ... or should I say Tommy ... nice to see you ... goodbye    ... see you in 2250 ....................
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Date: 4/4/2019 8:16:00 PM
hey, havent you seen around here lately? The SON OF SPOCK?? He is here!! He just visited my poem today. no kidding. heehee
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Date: 4/5/2019 7:01:00 AM
- Ticks are ectoparasites, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/4/2019 3:15:00 PM
I have to say I was caught up in the "science fiction aspect of it" and thought it was way over my head, but after reading all of the comments, I am in awe and screaming "WOW!"
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Date: 4/4/2019 1:56:00 PM
Wow Sunshine Smile, a rainbow and kaleidoscope of imagination which culminates in this wonderful futuristic poem - so well penned - well done dear friend - poetry hugs, Jenny.
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Date: 4/4/2019 12:55:00 PM
I haven't seen anything of the sort but your poem is very imaginative and intriguing. Well , I keep the days and...will check if the details are correct! Haha! Hugs dearest, Anne-Lise!
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Date: 4/4/2019 6:08:00 AM
Ah...shades of Star-Trek. There is this sort of Spock in so many. I do prefer Star-Trek's Spock; much more noble.
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Date: 4/4/2019 12:34:00 PM
:))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/3/2019 7:17:00 PM
splendid work on sci-fi, anne... are we talking ' star trek?'... love your sense of imagination here... happy huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/4/2019 4:20:00 AM
- No Nette, I'm talking about personality disorder - People who can't show their face and pollute "the soup" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/3/2019 6:12:00 PM
Quite original--imaginative write..well done, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 4/4/2019 4:53:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and commenting, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/3/2019 2:36:00 PM
Nice one Sunshine, have soupmailed you. Tom
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/4/2019 4:51:00 AM
- I am concerned about intelligent people ... who do not relate to our century, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/3/2019 2:17:00 PM
I guess Spock would say live long and prosper Anne-Lise and at the end of the day neither of us will be around to see this event, I the other spock is continuing to play games, lets hope he behaves this time! Just popped by to pick up soup mails so thought I would drop by a few poets :-) hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/4/2019 4:46:00 AM
- I really hope, ... that Poetry Soup is not a Game of Thrones, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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