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- Once Upon a Time -

Out of love foretold in thousands secret raptures from the old Illusions coves for their powerful voices A place where our ancestors once walked Where trees listening and disperse seeds of hope Creation marvelous portrait About the harmony - it is said that it can develop strong band It is a reality that can compare with the wildest imagination Ancient villages built of marble and stone Wind chimes a rhythm that beckons Mystery melody that asks us to join 13.11.2014 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/4/2015 10:27:00 PM

Just heading to bed and enjoyed reading this lovely piece. It is a very cold day and we are hitting -45 C tonight so did not go outside all day. Hope you had a wonderful holiday season. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2015 3:27:00 AM

- Stay warm ....... do not get chilled, dear Phyllis ..... br...rrrrr..rr soooo cold !!!- Thanks for the nice visit - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 12/30/2014 3:51:00 PM

Well this sparks the imagination of days of old. Happy New Year Anne oxox

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/30/2014 4:29:00 PM

- Thank you for your lovely visits and comments on my poem Debbie - Happy New Year :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lesley Micuda

Date: 12/15/2014 3:02:00 PM

stunning! :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2014 1:07:00 AM

- Thank you for your lovely visits and comments on my poem Lesley :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Whispering Plants

Date: 12/8/2014 8:40:00 PM

Hi, I found this poem really refreshing and it made me remembered what is reality, maybe that's why I chose this, you're a really good poet, I wish to read more of your poetry. -Whispering plants

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/9/2014 3:11:00 AM

- Thank you for your lovely visits and comments on my poem W.P. :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cindy Cayton

Date: 11/22/2014 1:13:00 PM

Nice to read your verse today. I will return after the first of the year to hold contests and have prizes. The circle of writers that I usually read, you were among whether I gave comment to or not. I'm different. Not really here for the most popularity contest, that would be my boyfriend at one time.. take care, reading a brand new circle of writers, I've been here awhile. I'll make my way back a day hopefully :) Thanks for your kind words on my poetry, I try to avoid remarks...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/23/2014 7:07:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and your comments - a pleasure to see you Cindy :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Britt Rose

Date: 11/17/2014 9:54:00 PM

Wow... you whisked me away with so few but so beautiful of words. Incredible, really

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/18/2014 3:17:00 AM

- Thank you for your lovely visits and comments on my poem Britt :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/17/2014 12:17:00 PM

mysterious and enchanting Anne Lise ty for visiting my page hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/17/2014 12:18:00 PM

- Thank you for your lovely visits and comments on my poem Shadow :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/17/2014 10:28:00 AM

Hay! what you are and who you are? I never miss myself saying you lovely lovely friend surely. A great philosophy, visionary..... and many things you have expressed simply with simple words. My lovely lovely friend of always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/17/2014 11:54:00 AM

- Thank you for your lovely visits and comments on my poem dear friend Bl :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 11/16/2014 6:21:00 AM

Love it! What was...is, if we only open our hearts to feel it. Your beginning and ending are perfect brackets for the poem "Out of love foretold...a mystery melody for us to join.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2014 6:35:00 AM

- Dear Monterey, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/16/2014 3:28:00 AM

Wonderful Anne Lise! all living entities emit vibrations (soul communication) and deserve equal respect...tho man has intellect, does not mean our vibrations are superior...Native American culture understands this...western culture does not....more humans are awakening to this harmonious truth, is it in time? hard to predict, we are in a 2-years time period of monumental change in mankind's history, love is the answer, jmg

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2014 5:00:00 AM

- Much wisdom comes from Native American culture, James ! :) Thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/15/2014 9:14:00 PM

I just knew from the title I was going to love this one, and I sure did!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2014 5:04:00 AM

- Arthur, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/15/2014 8:42:00 PM

Anne-Lise, A most imaginative write here indeed. Enjoyed the flow of the words and the images you presented. Totally Enchanting!! A Big "7" on this one and it's a FAV too!! Best Always, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2014 5:07:00 AM

- Gary, thank you for your visit, comments,"Big 7" and fave on my poem - "Once upon a time" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan

Date: 11/15/2014 6:39:00 PM

So beautiful Anne Lise, imagination at it's best, loved it take care my dear.....Vera.........

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2014 5:05:00 AM

- Dear Vera, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 11/15/2014 2:41:00 PM

I will join you anytime on the wings of fantasy, Anne Lise! Let the wind chimes play an enchanting melody! /x/ paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2014 3:30:00 PM

- Paul, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll

Date: 11/15/2014 12:49:00 PM

Great write Anne! Hope all is well...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2014 12:53:00 PM

- Ken, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 11/14/2014 5:54:00 PM

Charming, enchanting...your words transported me through time and space I'd want to be...just super, Anne-Lise! Kim ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2014 6:53:00 AM

- Kim, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sandip Goswami

Date: 11/14/2014 1:51:00 PM

Super creation...Once upon a time you were the queen in those ancient villages...Best to you...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2014 6:52:00 AM

- Sandip, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/14/2014 10:20:00 AM

Wind chimes a rhythm that beckons Mystery melody that asks us to join...I especially like these lines..Way to go with this one..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2014 11:56:00 AM

- Sara, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 11/14/2014 7:58:00 AM

Wonderful write Anne...I love the last 2 lines...Love

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2014 8:02:00 AM

- Joseph, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/14/2014 6:22:00 AM

and yes, you mystify, anne... lovely Friday to you!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2014 7:40:00 AM

- Nette, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/14/2014 4:53:00 AM

really very beautifully penned anne lise an excellent pen flowing excellent piece

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2014 7:40:00 AM

- Liam, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Donovan Willis

Date: 11/13/2014 11:58:00 PM

Great write. Deep and intriguing...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2014 7:39:00 AM

- Donovan, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/13/2014 3:32:00 PM

stunning and enchanting Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2014 7:39:00 AM

- Jan, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 11/13/2014 2:43:00 PM

Sounds like an enchanting place...hugs tim

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2014 7:39:00 AM

- Tim, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jaidah Stroche

Date: 11/13/2014 2:00:00 PM

I really like this one. Most likely a favorite of mine! It is a very creative and elaborate wording. ~JAIDAH~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2014 7:38:00 AM

- Jaidah, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)