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Oak Tree

Oak Tree Soaking in the sun Surrounded by painted pale blue heaven Light showers, Bathing the dust With a soft, cool whispered breeze Flowing through brown shedding leaves Gently falling like a feather Beneath my shade ~ I ponder at the day that I awoke from a tiny acorn And all the years that have passed With the changing of the seasons, It seems like an eternity ~ Birds, squirrels, and other small creatures Have come and gone, Leaving a small part of themselves ~ I’ve seen generations of children grow in years past With memories of their play with music and laughter Couples walking side by side holding hands ~ They’ve climbed my limbs and broke a few Now I’m rooted with my twisted, gnarled limbs Waiting for a few more hundred years ~ Soaking in the sun Surrounded by painted pale blue heaven Light showers, Bathing the dust With a soft, cool whispered breeze Flowing through brown shedding leaves Gently falling like a feather Beneath my shade 8/25/2015

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Date: 9/28/2015 10:37:00 PM
Eve nice win finally. A well deserved win!
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Date: 9/28/2015 9:56:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Eve! Congratulations on your win. Janice
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, Janice. Hugs Eve
Date: 9/28/2015 12:44:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Eve!
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dr. Upma A. Sharma, your support is always important . Hugs Eve
Date: 9/27/2015 9:38:00 AM
Eve, you have penned a well written piece. Great imagery! Congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:12:00 AM
Thank you so much, Alexis. Hugs Eve
Date: 9/27/2015 8:53:00 AM
Wow Eve! So much imagery! Congrats on your win!
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/28/2015 10:13:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tammy, compliments are always treasured. Hugs Eve
Date: 8/28/2015 2:37:00 AM
Painted in the colors of delightful poetry! Good luck my friend, Eve.
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Date: 8/27/2015 8:11:00 AM
You did this so well! Good luck in the contest Eve.
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Date: 8/25/2015 5:22:00 PM
Oh such delightful personification Eve good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/25/2015 5:28:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, I have a big Oak in front of my house and I love watching it espically when the wind is blewing it. Thank you for your support. Hugs Eve

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