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Realizing this with everyone who has passed away lately. It is so sad and tragic. My hope is that we, the ones left behind, as well as those we morn for have no regrets and know without a doubt just how much love is there...in life, in death and forever in our souls.

I've seen death today From one moment to the next Smooth roads ... life ended 11.11.2017 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Senryu: 5 - 7 - 5 - https://www.howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 11/21/2017 1:24:00 PM
A good point we should tell someone we love them because you never know what the future holds. love phyl
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Date: 11/21/2017 2:12:00 PM
- Tomorrow it may be too late, Phyllis - - Thank you for visiting - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/18/2017 11:11:00 PM
Sad places on those roads.
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Date: 11/19/2017 1:57:00 PM
- Thank you for visiting, Christopher - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/18/2017 1:18:00 PM
Indeed, it can be so sudden and those left behind struggle to make sense. A poignant but sensitive write, Anne-Lise. Regards, John.
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Date: 11/19/2017 1:56:00 PM
- Thank you for visiting, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/15/2017 3:26:00 PM
It's so true how life can be this way, and so sad.
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Date: 11/16/2017 4:28:00 AM
- Thank you for visit and comment, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/14/2017 10:21:00 PM
Indeed, we are but light switches. A sad, lovely piece. Viv x
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Date: 11/15/2017 4:18:00 AM
- Nobody knows tomorrow - Thank you for visiting, Viv :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/13/2017 2:03:00 PM
such a deep write i am speechless and uplifted at the same time, anne... much enjoyed..huggs
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Date: 11/13/2017 2:28:00 PM
- Thank you for visiting, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/13/2017 6:23:00 AM
It's horrible to witness an accident, Anne-lise, three lines say so much:)
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Date: 11/13/2017 8:15:00 AM
- It is like a movie that plays over and over in my head - Thank you for visiting, Jo - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/13/2017 3:02:00 AM
I came to read again, in three lines you spoke volumes, that resonate with me.
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Date: 11/13/2017 8:13:00 AM
- Always welcome, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/12/2017 3:39:00 PM
A heart touching my dear. Nicely done! Hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 11/13/2017 2:34:00 AM
- Thank you for visiting, Akkina - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/12/2017 1:39:00 PM
I didn't know you were a nurse... But it makes so much sense that you are...
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Date: 11/12/2017 1:51:00 PM
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Date: 11/12/2017 1:14:00 PM
Life can be lost without a moment's notice... lovely A-L
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Date: 11/12/2017 1:30:00 PM
- So true ... and sad, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/12/2017 12:44:00 PM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise, This one hits home with me too!! I've had my own experiences over the years, and my sister's family underwent a like tragedy earlier this year that is very well epitomized by the "blink of an eye" image you mention above. Extraordinary heartfelt and heart-rendering at that same time!! Ingrid and I hope all is well you!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 11/12/2017 1:29:00 PM
- Yes, I remember that tragedy ... so terribly sad, dear Gary and Ingrid - Like a seed that never gets the chance to become a beautiful flower - hugs // Anne-Lise :) ... (I'm ok)
Date: 11/12/2017 8:56:00 AM
This is really deep, from someone that has experienced close calls with death, this really appeals to me...
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Date: 11/12/2017 1:20:00 PM
- In my profession as a nurse I "know death" ... but this is so bloody and cold ... meaningless - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/12/2017 6:19:00 AM
That is such a sad write, to see a life cease is a very traumatic event, no matter who you are and who the deceased is! Like you said, it's even worse when it is a child that dies! That is so terrible, I will pray for the families! Great Work my friend!!
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Date: 11/12/2017 1:17:00 PM
- In one second ... everything was changed ... a happy day becomes terribly sad, Russell - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/12/2017 5:32:00 AM
Excellent. Very sad but Well said. Hope you are OK. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 11/12/2017 6:16:00 AM
- I'm okay, Ravi - My thoughts go to their families - Thank you for visiting - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/11/2017 8:50:00 PM
hope you are ok, Sunshine,, nicely done Hugs
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Date: 11/12/2017 6:13:00 AM
- Thank you for visiting, Eve - I'm okay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/11/2017 7:44:00 PM
this is so true, anne-lise! we never know what's going to happen right around the corner. well said!
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Date: 11/12/2017 6:13:00 AM
- Nobody knows tomorrow, Ilene - Thank you for visiting - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/11/2017 7:43:00 PM
I hope you are well, nice poem!
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Date: 11/12/2017 6:11:00 AM
- Thank you for visiting, Arthur - I'm okay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/11/2017 5:23:00 PM
Aw, so sad. I hope everything is okay.
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Date: 11/12/2017 6:10:00 AM
- I'm okay, Dale - My thoughts go to their families - Thank you for visiting - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/11/2017 4:10:00 PM
oh what a tragedy Anne-Lise - life is so fragile:-)( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/12/2017 6:08:00 AM
- Special when children are involved - My thoughts go to their families - Thank you for visiting, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/11/2017 3:29:00 PM
Life is so fragile--you captured the incident well in your poem Anne-Lise!
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Date: 11/12/2017 6:07:00 AM
- A cruel way to die - I'm okay - My thoughts go to their families - Thank you for visiting, Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/11/2017 2:02:00 PM
Nicely done AL..I would add guilt in reference to myself, but all apply....worthless quotient reaching fever pitch...need to shake it off, sorry so negative AL, not like me, just hitting a lot of frame crunching potholes lately...jimbo
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Date: 11/11/2017 2:12:00 PM
- Words to think about ... it applies to all of us, Jimbo - I'm there myself, lately - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/11/2017 1:39:00 PM
How divine my friend, Anne-Lise! Hugs! Much enjoyed! Today I posted as well!
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Date: 11/11/2017 2:50:00 PM
- A tragedy - Many thanks for your comment, my friend Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/11/2017 1:28:00 PM
I saw death too...and he is an unbelievable inspiration to live after, if you survive... All the best Anne
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Date: 11/11/2017 2:55:00 PM
- I witnessed death ... a human being was lost - Thank you for visiting, Arturo - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/11/2017 1:12:00 PM
Life is very fleeting...Well said Anne...
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Date: 11/11/2017 1:24:00 PM
- A terrible car crash ... nobody I knew ... but it led to death - Thank you for visiting, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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