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David Aaron

Date: 6/3/2016 3:28:00 AM

Really well said. There's something insidious about greed...standing on guard is essential.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/3/2016 5:37:00 AM

- David, thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/1/2016 3:58:00 PM

Greed comes from ignorance so uncontrollable restless quality. It's a black door of life leads to dirty region. A great philosophical poem my lovely lovely friend beautifully penned. Again a 7, am helpless here. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/1/2016 4:36:00 PM

- My friend Bl, thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/1/2016 12:44:00 PM

Interesting work.. Way to go.. Thanks for the visit to my page..Yes, what is the end for the greedy person..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/1/2016 1:02:00 PM

- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/1/2016 6:38:00 AM

Excellent. Well said. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/1/2016 12:27:00 PM

- Ravi, thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 5/31/2016 8:52:00 PM

Well expressed Sunshine...A7...hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/1/2016 5:38:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 5/31/2016 8:52:00 PM

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/1/2016 5:38:00 AM

Jean Murray

Date: 5/31/2016 7:24:00 PM

In Ireland we say "There are no pockets in a shroud". You say it very well Anne-Lisa.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/1/2016 5:37:00 AM

- We say the same thing in Norway, Jean - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/31/2016 2:03:00 PM

Oh how I can relate to this one Anne Lise!!! hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/31/2016 2:06:00 PM

- I understand who you have in your thoughts, dear Jan - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/31/2016 1:35:00 PM

:) Great write, Sunshine...Thanks for highlighting this. Greed is the basis for the corruption we see in our governments here in this part of the world.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/31/2016 1:38:00 PM

- A game of power, dear Eileen ..... dirty .... so dirty !!! - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 5/31/2016 1:03:00 PM

In that final hour we will look back and see who we really were...lovely A-L

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/31/2016 1:06:00 PM

- I believe you're right, Tim - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/31/2016 10:07:00 AM

The light of poetry obliterates any darkness! Wonderful dear, Anne-Lise. A seven!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/31/2016 11:36:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, my friend Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/31/2016 9:54:00 AM

Dark haiku:) still very enchanting:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/31/2016 11:34:00 AM

- Jo, thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/31/2016 9:31:00 AM

Anne-Lise. this is a most haunting haiku, beautifully so.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/31/2016 11:34:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Lenny - hugs // Anne-Lise :)