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- Haiku X 57 - Summer -

:) A landscape of dreams The canvas felt like curtain June, sun and flowers :( Turning season on Find that nothing stays the same Snow pillows in June A-L Andresen 30.05.2015 :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Alan Draeger

Date: 9/5/2015 4:15:00 PM

Anne-Lise : nicely expressed, taking full advantage of the formality of a haiku. Alan.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/5/2015 5:30:00 PM

- Alan, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 8/5/2015 10:54:00 AM

Anne-Lise, beautifully written x 2, a lovely 7 and thanks for visiting my sunset poem

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/5/2015 11:31:00 AM

- B.W., thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/27/2015 3:49:00 PM

Enjoy your haiku on summer. Summer has finally arrived and we are in a hot streak. Rain has eluded us most of this spring so very dry. Garden is not doing well at all. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/27/2015 4:01:00 PM

- We have received all the rain :))) - Wet and cold -Thanks for visiting and comments, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/6/2015 1:57:00 PM

Snow pillows in June sounds like my side of the equator. Love the emoticons that go with each haiku. Nice work.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/6/2015 2:12:00 PM

- It feels like a green winter :)) - Thanks for visiting and comments, Scott - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/6/2015 9:59:00 AM

Loved the extreme opposites you presented, Anne. Interesting to know your summer there. Hope you get a fine weather this weekend. Hugs! Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/6/2015 12:32:00 PM

- Norway .... cold and wet ..... it's rare we have really hot summer, but beautiful nature :) - Kim, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/5/2015 11:09:00 PM

Beautiful pen Anne Lise!A very wonderful and beautifully written haiku, I liked this one, and I'm hoping that you get lots of sunshine very soon, my dear friend Anne.I can send you some from South Florida if you want me to:)A 7!Always keeping you and your dad family in my prayers everyday Anne.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:) Hugs!D.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/6/2015 7:23:00 AM

- Dorian, thanks for visiting, a 7, prayers and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Diane M Quinlan

Date: 6/5/2015 1:46:00 PM

What a nice turn on nature out of season she must be. Hope she gets her moods straight! Well done nice read.......Didee

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/5/2015 1:51:00 PM

- One day the spring .... the next day winter .... X?X?X :))) - Diane, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 6/4/2015 2:37:00 AM

Snow pillows in June, lovely image Anne. Who knows perhaps we will get sunshine and flowers in winter~Delice

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/4/2015 7:39:00 AM

- Yes, who knows :))) - Delice, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/3/2015 10:17:00 PM

Love your poem a 7. Thank you for your visit and reading “When A Woman Is Just A Woman”. :~) Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/4/2015 7:40:00 AM

- Eve, thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Peter Dome

Date: 6/3/2015 12:52:00 PM

Just beautiful Anne Lise, love the visuals. very well done, enjoyed very much a 7. best wishes. Pete.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/3/2015 1:11:00 PM

- Peter, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/2/2015 2:25:00 PM

Hello Dear Anne-Lise!! A quite striking Haiku here. I like the way you present the seasonal contrast here. "Snow pillows in June" doesn't sound very spring-like. (The weather's crazy nowadays anyway!!) Most Excellent Write!! Best Wishes Always Dear One, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/3/2015 3:34:00 AM

- No, it feels more like December ...... soon celebrate Christmas again :))) - Crazy, that's the right word - Thank you for your visit and comments, my dear friend Gary - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/2/2015 2:04:00 PM

ohh, i like the added vesre here, anne.. i see the polarity of seasons.. ever so lovely... have a fine day!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/2/2015 2:12:00 PM

- Norwegian summer !!!! - Thanks, dear Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 6/2/2015 9:47:00 AM

beautiful haiku anne lise funny it's summer here but it hailstones and a forecast of snow never seen this type of weather in our country before not in the summer excellent pen dear pal wishing you a lovely week filled with warm smiles

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/2/2015 11:56:00 AM

- Not even my dogs want to be out :) - Thanks for visiting and comments .... it warms with a smile from you Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/2/2015 8:43:00 AM

Excellent. Beautifully expressed. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/2/2015 11:56:00 AM

- Ravi, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 6/2/2015 2:56:00 AM

Hello Anne! How is your day? Seems like you have a cold season there :) wishing you all great :D hug, Yanny and Ken

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/2/2015 3:57:00 AM

- Yes, it feels like a green winter :)) - Thanks for visiting and comments .... it warms with hugs from you and Ken:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 6/1/2015 10:07:00 AM

Anne Lise, so true, summer is fleeting and then winter seems so long, love your haiku, 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, shameonyou

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/1/2015 12:43:00 PM

- I wish that summer was here, B.W. ...... we had SNOW today also :( - Thanks for visiting and comments .... it warms :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/31/2015 4:48:00 PM

A beautiful haiku of summer season beautifully seen. Loved always, my lovely lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/1/2015 9:50:00 AM

- Bl, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/31/2015 2:45:00 PM

Ahh!!!I enjoyed reading this one.. Very descriptive work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/31/2015 2:48:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/31/2015 2:25:00 PM

How you express your art amazes me.What you have penned in a few words says alot to your readers. I'm glad I stopped by to view this beautiful 7 piece:)Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/31/2015 2:35:00 PM

- Alexis, thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 5/31/2015 7:46:00 AM

Wow! Double Wow! You painted a whole world with only a few words! Magnificent!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/31/2015 12:53:00 PM

- ...... while I wait for summer ...... I try to get sunshine ...... not snow :))) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Monterey :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/30/2015 11:49:00 PM

you are summer personified, anne.. so lovely!.. huggs this sunday

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/31/2015 12:49:00 PM

- Wish I could say that we have a delicious and warm summer ..... but, no it's cold ..... - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)