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- Haiku X 11 - Spring -

Fourteen hours traveling Blue sea, the sun heats I'm in paradise * If you're wondering where "My Paradise" is? - Read my poem posted 09.20.2012: "My Paradise". :) :) :) 03.03.2013 A-L Andresen :)

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Mick Free

Date: 4/17/2013 3:35:00 AM

Thanks for the image - my last trip to Turkey was just to Istanbul, a million people at Taksim Square and the Istikbal....a beach would have helped. Your words speak for many escapes, hope the next paradise is as inspiring.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/17/2013 3:40:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Mike. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 3/15/2013 12:43:00 PM

Now you've got ME wondering! But this poem stands alone as a piece with lovely imagery. Well done Anne! Best wishes, Keith

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/15/2013 12:48:00 PM

- Sunny greetings and thanks from Turkey and me: / / Anne-Lise :)

Painted Hunter

Date: 3/13/2013 6:03:00 AM

I get all the sun and heat I can stand here....Too Much! Great haiku, Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/13/2013 6:05:00 AM

I have to travel far to get plus degrees! - Sunny greetings and thanks from Turkey and me: / / Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/9/2013 12:18:00 PM

Well depends on how hot it is but will take some heat but not desert heat. Around 70 F is good or 20C. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/9/2013 12:22:00 PM

I travel far to get plus degrees! - Sunny greetings and thanks from Turkey and me: / / Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 3/9/2013 12:02:00 PM

Wow - fourteen hours traveling! When I was youger I traveled across the entire U.S. with my family by car. I want to go to Isreal but it is about 13 or so hous away. I would also like to see Norway - Do you like the music of Edvard Grieg? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/9/2013 12:10:00 PM

His music is enormous!!! - Norway is a beautiful country, but everything is expensive !!!!! - Sunny greetings and thanks from Turkey and me: / / Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/9/2013 11:36:00 AM

It's been too long since I've been on a real road trip... thanks for taking me there with your haiku. I'd be interested to know what you went down during the 14 hours in the car... I always enjoy the little road games to pass the time.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/9/2013 11:47:00 AM

Not by car ...... Fly! - From my city the capital city of Norway - to Turkey - delayed flight here and there. - Planes can not take off because of fog, planes can not take off because of ice ...... waiting and waiting .... but I arrived to the end.- Sunny greetings and thanks from Turkey and me: / / Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 3/9/2013 11:34:00 AM

Hello my dear friend Anne Lise..like your poem so much...I'm a nature lover you know :) so refreshing to be in our own paradise. I already read your poem last year about "My Paradise" but didn't write a comment :) Thanks for sharing this and thanks for your kind visit on my poem. big hug from me to you. Have a blessed day always! Maria

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/9/2013 11:40:00 AM

Sunny greetings and thanks from Turkey and me: / / Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 3/8/2013 10:38:00 AM

Wow! I love the very wonderful image in your outstanding Haiku my dear friend Anne Lise! I feel like I am enjoying the trip with you in that paradise, Turkey! Thank you so much for sharing with me both this great write and great feeling! Thank you so much as well for your very wonderful comments on my latest poem. You're very creative and very talented as well. Again, thanks a lot and have a great weekend! love much, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2013 10:49:00 AM

Sunny greetings and thanks from Turkey and me: / / Anne-Lise :)

Lucy Kieti

Date: 3/7/2013 12:45:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise for your encouragement. I will keep on writing.Lykke til !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2013 9:26:00 AM

Lykke til du også ! Sunny greetings and thanks from / / Anne-Lise :)

David Williams

Date: 3/7/2013 3:33:00 AM

Anne Lise great haiku...peace...David

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2013 9:25:00 AM