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Mirror of the past Appreciate the beauty History's language Ancient adventure Personality and style Forgotten summer A soul of the time Do not need makeup to glow Threatened by decay Dark clouds in the sky Tears are washed away by rain Grief, pain, loss and love - 31.05.2017 - Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) - Copyright © All Rights Reserved - www.howmanysyllables.com - Haiku 5-7-5

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Bl Devnath

Date: 6/5/2017 4:10:00 PM

Excellently done this string of haiku. A natural poem on memory of old beauty. A ++7 indeed from heart. Loved always my lovely friend, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/6/2017 3:56:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and your friendly support, Bl :) - Always nice to see you :) - greeting and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Michaels

Date: 6/5/2017 2:10:00 AM

Great string of Haiku, Anne-Lise. I'm reminded of a Hollywood starlet, growing old gracefully but still retaining her alluring beauty. All the best, John.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/5/2017 8:11:00 AM

- Thank you for your lovely comments, John :) - I greatly appreciate :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2017 8:08:00 PM

Lovely title for this nostalgic piece, Anne-Lise. I especially enjoyed the final stanza!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/4/2017 6:10:00 AM

- Thank you for your lovely comments, Andrea :) - I greatly appreciate :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham

Date: 6/2/2017 9:19:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise , beautiful Haiku , Time passing bye :)))hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/2/2017 12:07:00 PM

- Many thanks for your comments and support, Niall :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams

Date: 6/2/2017 8:32:00 AM

A wonderful Haiku set Anne-Lise. I love the description you have woven into the set - It makes me think of the memories someone had about the vintage vehicle in it's glory days now abandoned - does the former owner think about at all? I love your third set about not needing make up - Your picture says it all - the rain clouds to wash the sadness away. Maria xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/2/2017 12:06:00 PM

- How many children do you think, had to share one bed in this little house, Maria - Many thanks for your lovely comments and support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/1/2017 9:57:00 PM

Wonderful set of haiku, Sunshine, I love the imagery you created in your poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/2/2017 12:06:00 PM

- Many thanks for your comments and support, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 6/1/2017 4:11:00 PM

I agree totally with Jo. Hi Anne-Lise, this form seems to sing when your words flow into it. A set of Haiku's that encompass your subject, giving it life. So much expressed in so few words. You know that this set of Haiku has to be a fave. This form sings when coming from your pen. Excellent as always Anne-Lise. Hugs....Mike. XX

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/2/2017 12:11:00 PM

- Mike, thank you for another fav. on my haiku poems (I guess you have a big collection of my haikus :) - Many thanks for your lovely comments and support, always :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/1/2017 10:38:00 AM

Wonderful set of haikus, so much in between the short lines, masterfully crafted, Anne-lise:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/1/2017 1:37:00 PM

- Many thanks for your comments and support, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/1/2017 8:09:00 AM

A haika quartet...beautifully done Anne Lise...great integration...smiles and hugs...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/1/2017 1:36:00 PM

- Many thanks for your comments and support, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Honestly J.T.

Date: 6/1/2017 4:45:00 AM

The word character is what came to mind when I read this poem. Thanks for sharing -JT

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/1/2017 1:36:00 PM

- Many thanks for your comments and support, Honestly :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/31/2017 4:54:00 PM

Like the last one best.Nice string of haiku. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/1/2017 2:03:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and your friendly support, Phyllis :) - Always nice to see you :) - greeting and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/31/2017 12:36:00 PM

A lovely string of haiku which biuld to form a grwat image Anne lise :-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/31/2017 2:03:00 PM

- I love "old pictures with history" - Many thanks for your comments and support, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Semih Bilgic

Date: 5/31/2017 10:09:00 AM

yes

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/31/2017 2:00:00 PM

- Thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Wolf

Date: 5/31/2017 8:35:00 AM

Oh, Anne-Lise! These are stunning haikus! The first one really strikes a chord in me! Not denoting the second one of course! They are harmonious together! Beautifully done!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/31/2017 1:59:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and your friendly support, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)