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Fourteen hours traveling Blue sea, the sun heats I'm in paradise * If you're wondering where "My Paradise" is? - Read my poem posted 09.20.2012: "My Paradise". :) :) :) 03.03.2013 A-L Andresen :)

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Date: 4/17/2013 3:35:00 AM
Thanks for the image - my last trip to Turkey was just to Istanbul, a million people at Taksim Square and the Istikbal....a beach would have helped. Your words speak for many escapes, hope the next paradise is as inspiring.
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Date: 4/17/2013 3:40:00 AM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Mike. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/15/2013 12:43:00 PM
Now you've got ME wondering! But this poem stands alone as a piece with lovely imagery. Well done Anne! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 3/15/2013 12:48:00 PM
- Sunny greetings and thanks from Turkey and me: / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/13/2013 6:03:00 AM
I get all the sun and heat I can stand here....Too Much! Great haiku, Anne
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Date: 3/13/2013 6:05:00 AM
I have to travel far to get plus degrees! - Sunny greetings and thanks from Turkey and me: / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/9/2013 12:18:00 PM
Well depends on how hot it is but will take some heat but not desert heat. Around 70 F is good or 20C. love phyl
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Date: 3/9/2013 12:22:00 PM
I travel far to get plus degrees! - Sunny greetings and thanks from Turkey and me: / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/9/2013 12:02:00 PM
Wow - fourteen hours traveling! When I was youger I traveled across the entire U.S. with my family by car. I want to go to Isreal but it is about 13 or so hous away. I would also like to see Norway - Do you like the music of Edvard Grieg? Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/9/2013 12:10:00 PM
His music is enormous!!! - Norway is a beautiful country, but everything is expensive !!!!! - Sunny greetings and thanks from Turkey and me: / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/9/2013 11:36:00 AM
It's been too long since I've been on a real road trip... thanks for taking me there with your haiku. I'd be interested to know what you went down during the 14 hours in the car... I always enjoy the little road games to pass the time.
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Date: 3/9/2013 11:47:00 AM
Not by car ...... Fly! - From my city the capital city of Norway - to Turkey - delayed flight here and there. - Planes can not take off because of fog, planes can not take off because of ice ...... waiting and waiting .... but I arrived to the end.- Sunny greetings and thanks from Turkey and me: / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/9/2013 11:34:00 AM
Hello my dear friend Anne Lise..like your poem so much...I'm a nature lover you know :) so refreshing to be in our own paradise. I already read your poem last year about "My Paradise" but didn't write a comment :) Thanks for sharing this and thanks for your kind visit on my poem. big hug from me to you. Have a blessed day always! Maria
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Date: 3/9/2013 11:40:00 AM
Sunny greetings and thanks from Turkey and me: / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/8/2013 10:38:00 AM
Wow! I love the very wonderful image in your outstanding Haiku my dear friend Anne Lise! I feel like I am enjoying the trip with you in that paradise, Turkey! Thank you so much for sharing with me both this great write and great feeling! Thank you so much as well for your very wonderful comments on my latest poem. You're very creative and very talented as well. Again, thanks a lot and have a great weekend! love much, Leonora
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Date: 3/8/2013 10:49:00 AM
Sunny greetings and thanks from Turkey and me: / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2013 12:45:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise for your encouragement. I will keep on writing.Lykke til !
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Date: 3/8/2013 9:26:00 AM
Lykke til du også ! Sunny greetings and thanks from / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2013 3:33:00 AM
Anne Lise great haiku...peace...David
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Date: 3/8/2013 9:25:00 AM
Sunny greetings and thanks from / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2013 2:03:00 AM
Anne Lise...enchanting haiku. I'm in love with the sun...that's why I adore Cyprus where I lived for 17 years....Go visit! :)
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Date: 3/7/2013 2:37:00 AM
Sunny greetings and thanks from / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/6/2013 10:37:00 PM
Thank you Anne for reading Haiku six and liking it ;} xo's
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Date: 3/7/2013 2:37:00 AM
Sunny greetings and thanks from / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/6/2013 10:00:00 PM
I think I read somewhere it is Turkey, how nice is that! The flight time gives me the willies though! Hope you had a ball
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Date: 3/7/2013 2:37:00 AM
Sunny greetings and thanks from / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/5/2013 11:40:00 PM
Yes, I can feel the sun!
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Date: 3/6/2013 2:21:00 AM
Sunny greetings and thanks from / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/5/2013 4:58:00 PM
Enjoy paradise until the 14 hrs travel back!!!!!
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Date: 3/6/2013 2:21:00 AM
Sunny greetings and thanks from / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/4/2013 8:19:00 PM
Have a wonderful time!!! :o)
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Date: 3/5/2013 5:29:00 AM
Thanks for the good wishes,Dan ... f.e.f. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/4/2013 1:16:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..Blue sea and sun reads like Paradise..Sara
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Date: 3/5/2013 5:28:00 AM
Sara, thank you for coming to visit and sent with an comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/4/2013 5:43:00 AM
You have brought the sun shine. Enjoyed your paradise. Lovely Haiku. Tfs
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Date: 3/4/2013 6:35:00 AM
Hi Ravi, thank you for coming to visit and sent with an comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/4/2013 4:51:00 AM
I wish I were there. It's in the teens here in Michigan. Enjoy your paradise. A great Haiku Anne. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/4/2013 4:58:00 AM
Hi Connie, thank you for coming to visit and sent with an comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/3/2013 5:47:00 PM
Oh, I understand fully, Anne-Lise. I've heard much about Turkey, from a friend named Dorukan...beautiful! I'm happy that you could get away, dear friend. Lots of love, Annalise
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Date: 3/4/2013 2:02:00 AM
Hi Annalise, thank you for coming to visit and sent with an comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/3/2013 4:35:00 PM
so lovely, anne lise! enjoy every minute...
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Date: 3/4/2013 2:02:00 AM
Hi Ilene, thank you for coming to visit and sent with an comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/3/2013 3:40:00 PM
so i'm i after reading this...
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Date: 3/4/2013 2:02:00 AM
Hi Harry, thank you for coming to visit and sent with an comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/3/2013 1:41:00 PM
Thank you, for bringing the sunshine with you!
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Date: 3/3/2013 2:19:00 PM
Hi Demetrios, thank you for coming to visit and sent with an comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/3/2013 11:33:00 AM
Oh indeed 'paradise'!!! Salt air and sun...well done Anne Lise!!! Love you bunches. Deb
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Date: 3/3/2013 12:10:00 PM
Hi Deborah, thank you for coming to visit and sent with an comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/3/2013 8:42:00 AM
Wow! That must be nice. I like your Teddy bear Pic. Enjoy yourself and come back soon. Lucilla
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Date: 3/3/2013 12:09:00 PM
Hi Lucilla, thank you for coming to visit and sent with an comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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