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- Grey Shadows Never Dies -

The black side of a life betrayal and choked dreams Cries of pain that are locked into their souls Evil twistfate deals aches and screams Inside darkened dungeons filled with peril and woe In the trap, feels like stuck in of eternity madness Hands are not chained but mind is unclear Hidden away from the world today within darkness crying Nightmares of life's perils strike deep irons hotly burns Blowing with the wind, flying a hurricane Shamelessly all trying to live from day to day Frozen ice frosting bites cold deeds creeps inside scars Slowly from the scrapyard of life's twisted metal crushed They cried many tear, tears of hope - wanted life to last But life was not fair enough as the remains lay deeply covered Unraveling out savagery of an animal cold cutting steel beast cursed Piercing howls forgiving the past in order to be redeemed blessed A co write written by Liam Mcdaid and Anne-Lise Andresen :) - 20.01.2015 -

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Date: 1/22/2015 12:25:00 PM
Enjoyed it liam/Anne-Lise. Great collab. God bless.
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Date: 1/22/2015 12:21:00 PM
Cold and dark... nice poem Liam
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Date: 1/21/2015 6:19:00 PM
I commented on this when Anne lise posted it Liam - so deep and dark with amazing imagery - great write my friends a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/21/2015 1:04:00 PM
- In the Bible it says: "As the Lord has forgiven you, you shall forgive one another" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/21/2015 12:25:00 PM
Hi Liam & Anne-Lise! This is a very powerful collaboration between the two of you! Wow! Very deep and intense pens here my dearest friends Liam and Anne-Lise! Very sad but well written stuff right from the very heart and soul. A 7 +++ For each of you! As always you two have golden pens!.smiling.I wish you both a very lovely day!God bless yo u and all His angels from heaven protect you against any evil! :) Love and hugs! xxoxxoxxoxxx D. ^O^
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Date: 1/21/2015 11:56:00 AM
Ah...I am in a dark mood tonight and this fits well....there is a lot of pain in the world...Thanks for sharing this...especially the hope in the last line. Great collab the two of you.
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