Distances

The distance that hurts me the most it's not that of light-years that separate us ... but that of zeptometers, between my eyes and your eyes...that tears me inside ...!

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/13/2019 10:16:00 PM

Fascinating poem, Alkas! Hugs, Panagiota

Alkas Poetry
Date: 8/14/2019 3:10:00 PM

YES DEAR PANAGIOTA...IT IS REAL PLEASURE HAVING YOU COMMENTING MY WORK, I THANK YOU VERY MUCH, SALUTE ALKAS

Jeff Connelly

Date: 8/13/2019 6:17:00 PM

I did have to look up what a zeptometer was Alkas; now knowing, it is a favorite word. And this poem blows me away. Close and far make no difference in any of this.

Alkas Poetry
Date: 8/13/2019 9:51:00 PM

In the long distance we can travel the path and get close, now being as close as a Zeptometro is no longer possible and that makes all the difference ...! sALUTE DEAR jEFF, ALKAS

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/13/2019 3:52:00 PM

Good one, Alkas.

Alkas Poetry
Date: 8/13/2019 9:52:00 PM

Line it is good having you here commenting my work, thank you dear, salute alkas