Diamond

mischievous smart boy succeeds in cutting the pane sans breaking the glass

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/3/2021 4:41:00 PM

Good luck keeping this little boy out of trouble ~

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/25/2021 11:35:00 AM

Hello Alaka, broken glass is not a diamond. Salute Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/26/2021 11:50:00 AM

Hello Alakas a very good metaphor. Yes giving a diamond to a smart boy. Salute Da\rlene

Alkas Poetry
Date: 4/26/2021 11:24:00 AM

It is Also animism... metaphor givng to diamond qualitaty of SMART boy... salute alkas

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/25/2021 3:23:00 PM

Hello Alkas, yes diamonds cut glass and and does not break. Yes diamonds are the hardest natural substance known. Also expensive at the jewellery store.Salute Darlene & peace.

Alkas Poetry
Date: 4/25/2021 1:14:00 PM

Diamond cuts Glass not breaks it...mischievous Boys they break Windows panes made of glass...Diamond is the hardest natural substance known ... - That's why it cuts glass ... salute AND peace alkas