Diamond

mischievous smart boy
                succeeds in cutting the pane
                sans breaking the glass
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Gauthier Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 4:41 PM
Good luck keeping this little boy out of trouble ~
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 11:35 AM
Hello Alaka, broken glass is not a diamond. Salute Darlene
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April 26, 2021 at 11:50 AM
Hello Alakas a very good metaphor. Yes giving a diamond to a smart boy. Salute Da\rlene
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April 26, 2021 at 11:24 AM
It is Also animism... metaphor givng to diamond qualitaty of SMART boy... salute alkas
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 3:23 PM
Hello Alkas, yes diamonds cut glass and and does not break. Yes diamonds are the hardest natural substance known. Also expensive at the jewellery store.Salute Darlene & peace.
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April 25, 2021 at 1:14 PM
Diamond cuts Glass not breaks it...mischievous Boys they break Windows panes made of glass...Diamond is the hardest natural substance known ... - That's why it cuts glass ... salute AND peace alkas
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