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To our world, we are traitors filled with hate Confidence we had, turned to wonder and doubt The spirit of brotherhood is divided into a thousand pieces _________/)______./¯"""/') ¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯\)¯¯¯¯¯'\_„„„„\) The face of a sincere soul, bleed never loose battle It's time to wash away the blood of guilt Testing the earth durability with bombs and heavy weapons _________/)______./¯"""/') ¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯\)¯¯¯¯¯'\_„„„„\) Look me in the eyes, the dream is killed This is the reality From another place and time, a beautiful garden _________/)______./¯"""/') ¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯\)¯¯¯¯¯'\_„„„„\) Returning to the world that was heaven What will we sacrifice to go back there The world has changed in pain _________/)______./¯"""/') ¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯\)¯¯¯¯¯'\_„„„„\) 13.07.2016 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved - Published in the Newspaper : 16.07.2016

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Wendy Rycroft

Date: 8/7/2016 6:14:00 AM

Very creative words, well written, great poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/7/2016 6:21:00 AM

- Thanks Wendy for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/19/2016 5:35:00 AM

This is the sad reality of our world today, brought out beautifully:) Love your roses:) though I prefer red roses:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/19/2016 6:09:00 AM

- I prefer the red ones me too, Jo - Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/17/2016 7:14:00 AM

Why is it, Anne-Lisa everyone that comments here agrees with you as do i. and billions of other folk,,only a hand full of evil black roses, manipulate what we are experiencing in today's troubled world, and once analyzed there will be an all mighty profit to gain. Keep on with your poetry, Sunshine, the world will one day see the light again..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/17/2016 8:07:00 AM

- I hope ... and believe, that there is more love in the world than evils - .....one day .... Harry ! - Thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/16/2016 3:55:00 PM

The heart break of today's world. I like the message in your poem and the roses. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/17/2016 6:11:00 AM

- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Phyllis :) - Nice that you enjoy my "black" roses - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/16/2016 11:22:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, You have penned a heartfelt write for such a time as this. I agree your message.Well done and congrats this relvelant write published. A Big seven:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/16/2016 1:04:00 PM

- Thank you for the lovely comments, a 7, congrats and enjoyable visit, Alexis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2016 11:07:00 AM

this one is very fitting in light of today's horrible news. You published this in the paper, huh? Big congrats for that, Anne Lise!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/16/2016 1:05:00 PM

- Andrea thank you for the lovely comments, congrats and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Smith

Date: 7/16/2016 6:34:00 AM

One of the best. Give a 7. I have posted several new ones. Will take a break tomorrow. I am thinking too much in rhyme and going past my bed time. Your friend always David in NZ

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/16/2016 6:49:00 AM

- Thank you for the lovely comments a 7 and enjoyable visit, David :) - Glad you liked it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 7/15/2016 3:25:00 PM

Will we ever learn?! It is so easy to love....why do people have to turn to hate? Very meaningful messages...and lovely rose designs, Anne Lise! Have a nice weekend...hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2016 3:43:00 PM

- Love is not difficult ...... but hate is cruel and pointless in my eyes - We never learn - Today is a new day in grief, Paul - So sad - Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jesse Day

Date: 7/15/2016 1:58:00 PM

Love this poem with illustrations - even wth the sad theme - the message you sent leaves me with a glimmer of hope. Thanks for the message. Jesse

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2016 3:21:00 PM

- Jesse, almost difficult to understand how much hatred there is in our world - Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/15/2016 8:31:00 AM

Anne-Lise Dear One, This one is filled with poignancy and most powerful emotion. As sad as this theme is, you've rendered it extraordinarily well!! Your message jumps off the page to the reader. Outstanding!! "TR/FAV" for sure. Best Wishes Always, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2016 3:19:00 PM

- Thank you for the lovely comments a 7+fav. and enjoyable visit, Gary :) - Glad you liked it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 7/14/2016 6:50:00 PM

Anne-Lise, so much said in this write than need to be heard. I am so tired of seeing and hearing of all the evil that needs to be cleansed. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2016 3:16:00 PM

- Today is a new day in grief, dear Eve - Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 7/14/2016 5:42:00 PM

Powerful piece of writing Anne lise anarchy is coming with chaos when the moral standing of society breaks down passing you a warm smile pal

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2016 3:14:00 PM

- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/14/2016 3:57:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for dropping by..Creating a design on the computer with the keys is not easy but you made it look like a piece of cake..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2016 3:13:00 PM

- Sara, thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/14/2016 2:47:00 PM

The world has changed in pain, excellent line you have drawn here. A beautiful poem on reality of the present word. A great 7 my lovely lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2016 3:23:00 PM

- Bl, thank you for the lovely comments a 7 and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/14/2016 9:44:00 AM

very deep and sad Anne Lise -no wonder th4e rose turned black with the pain in the world - love the rose image you created - you are so clever i loved the angel too:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2016 12:07:00 PM

- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Jan :) - Nice that you enjoy my "black" roses - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/13/2016 11:09:00 PM

Excellent. Powerful and deep write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks fro sharing it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2016 8:05:00 AM

- Ravi, thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/13/2016 10:09:00 PM

Only you can write with such passion...hopefully we as poets can turn that rose back to its original color... enjoyed my friend...god bless...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2016 8:04:00 AM

- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, W.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/13/2016 4:59:00 PM

ohh wow, so powerful, anne.. keep the love, throw the hate!... happy day and huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2016 8:03:00 AM

- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/13/2016 4:30:00 PM

Deep and painful truths written masterfully in this poem dear, Anne-Lise! May we learn before is to late! A seven!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/13/2016 4:33:00 PM

- We never learn, my friend Demetrios - Thank you for the lovely comments a 7 and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 7/13/2016 4:06:00 PM

The final line sums it all up A-L "The world has changed in pain."

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/13/2016 4:31:00 PM

- Thanks, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)