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Beneath the Heavens

A universe of stars and planets an endless garden Of an ardent celestial space formal pardon Galaxies visible humming full of wonder An abiding ancient central source of power Adrift the spinster, sanctified sluice sky hung under Illuminating loose in space strong, bold, and cold To behold, as she pleads to the world young or old Never to stand in gesture wavering as we go Crawling overtime and remembers us below Sailors sail crouched to its myth beneath the heavens While lanterns light cast shadows in darken absence Touch of life smitten with the tranquil purity And wander hand in hand nature's simplicity Bound in its embodied worlds epic fantasy To bare its soul under laughing stars canopy 4/17/2017

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Date: 4/20/2017 4:44:00 PM
Lovely imagery and visions, Eve. Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/20/2017 1:45:00 PM
Like the garden metaphor! Congratulations on your win Eve! :-)
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Date: 4/18/2017 8:15:00 PM
Congrats to you on your win in my contest, Eve!
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/18/2017 9:07:00 PM
White Wolf, you just made my day... Thank you so very much...
Date: 4/18/2017 10:31:00 AM
Celestial writing of beauty untold dear, Eve! a 7!
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/18/2017 9:08:00 PM
Demetrios, thank you so very much for the uplift i needed Hugs Dear friend

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