Bare and Naked

Bare with Me He said, she said While making love in bed I will always love you No matter what I do. Would you die for me.. Forever we will be. Trust me, Forgive me. Now I understand It won't happen again Sorry that I made you cry Give me another try. My mistake You can't take I see regret in your eye Loving me is that a lie. Already apologize. Did not recognized On my knees Begging please Do not leave me I did not see My dirty deed Bare with me I'm sorry a thousand times. So please forgive me. The way I forgave you When you had your love affair I bored with you now, Bare with me. **HE SAID SHE SAID** SKAT P.S. As bare as the naked truth

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Talin Kalishian

Date: 9/20/2016 6:19:00 AM

its funny i like this one best , try to write more , i would love to read of this kind thankx

Jaquay Atkins

Date: 4/20/2016 8:53:00 PM

Stay or go ... is the question

David Shaw

Date: 3/26/2016 11:43:00 PM

this is really good . . . David

Osita Azike

Date: 3/13/2016 12:25:00 AM

Wow. This is deep. Thanks for checking out my poems.

Roger Page

Date: 2/4/2016 4:54:00 AM

Sad sad sad Not a life experience I hope? Love Roger

Nick Evans

Date: 1/29/2016 8:06:00 PM

Hi, I liked how you wrote this. Neat poem.....keep them coming.

Joseph Guth

Date: 9/24/2015 9:38:00 PM

Intense interaction

Willie A. Buchanan

Date: 3/26/2015 6:58:00 PM

This is very good,babe! I like to dig down deep and find pearls of wisdom and poetry. Thanks for your visit and comments.Check out,"TIME IN A CELL." Have a nice day!

Paul Callus

Date: 6/16/2014 3:51:00 AM

Truth be said, this is worth thinking about. How would I react if in same situation? Love has no boundaries...they say...but there are limitations. Still pondering my next move......:) Take care // paul

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/13/2014 9:38:00 PM

It's the only way to do it in bed with a partner. You describe it well in this piece.

Ajeyemi Wasiu Ajewumi

Date: 1/12/2014 5:32:00 AM

Wonderful per excellent job. Your ink will not dry.

Elvernia Russell

Date: 12/26/2013 1:50:00 PM

Skat this is an excellent piece of work. I just picked it out randomly and I love it. Keep up the excellent job.

David Williams

Date: 12/18/2013 2:39:00 AM

Skat, a very good piece of work, good flow….David

Jan Cannon

Date: 11/6/2013 12:24:00 AM

A great poem!

Robin Davis

Date: 10/17/2013 11:32:00 PM

SKAT This is a powerful piece. Very seductive and provocative in a deep way. Nice job

Caryl-Anne Ok

Date: 7/17/2013 3:59:00 PM

really good poem. it was beautifully written. :))

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/24/2013 7:27:00 AM

Well done, I enjoyed this piece.

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 5/27/2013 9:27:00 PM

Lovely poem Skat,i really enjoyed this.Thanks for inviting me on your poem page.I have posted one called the enchanted day...do enjoy my second post here.

Richard D Seal

Date: 5/7/2013 7:15:00 PM

Lots of people get their bear/bares mixed up, it can add a whole new dimension to bear loving lol. Thanks for your comment Skat, Take care, Richard

Kristelle Antonette Clerigo

Date: 4/20/2013 12:51:00 AM

Beautiful <3

Shining Bright

Date: 4/19/2013 3:18:00 PM

this is a super write. enjoyed reading.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/2/2011 5:58:00 AM

While stopping by to read some of your amazing poetry I would like to thank you for your comments on my poetry. Your words are always appreciated ~SKAT~. May the sun always shine down upon you and fill your soul with inspiration. Love, Carol

Jamila Strong

Date: 9/22/2010 6:14:00 PM

I'VE WRITTEN SOMETHING SIMILAR VERY GOOD, I ALSO LIKE RHYTHM IT HAS TO IT

Chris Smith

Date: 8/14/2010 9:27:00 PM

Sensual way of baring the soul.

Anthony Beesley

Date: 8/7/2010 11:15:00 AM

sexy and seductive write also cutting sharp and to the point