Bare and Naked

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Bare and Naked

Bare with Me

He said, she said
While making love in bed
I will always love you
No matter what I do.
Would you die for me..
Forever we will be.

Trust me, Forgive me.
Now I understand
It won't happen again
Sorry that I made you cry
Give me another try.

My mistake
You can't take
I see regret in your eye
Loving me is that a lie.
Already apologize.
Did not recognized

On my  knees 
Begging please
Do not leave me
I did not see
My dirty deed
Bare with me

I'm sorry a thousand times.
So please forgive me.
The way I forgave you
When you had your love affair 
I bored with you now, 
Bare with me.

**HE SAID SHE SAID**
           
           SKAT
P.S.  As bare as the naked truth 
     

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 9/20/2016 6:19:00 AM
its funny i like this one best , try to write more , i would love to read of this kind thankx
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Date: 4/20/2016 8:53:00 PM
Stay or go ... is the question
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Date: 3/26/2016 11:43:00 PM
this is really good . . . David
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Date: 3/13/2016 12:25:00 AM
Wow. This is deep. Thanks for checking out my poems.
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Date: 2/4/2016 4:54:00 AM
Sad sad sad Not a life experience I hope? Love Roger
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Date: 1/29/2016 8:06:00 PM
Hi, I liked how you wrote this. Neat poem.....keep them coming.
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Date: 1/13/2016 1:14:00 AM
The regret and desperately needed mercy is palpable! Powerful poem SKAT.
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Date: 9/24/2015 9:38:00 PM
Intense interaction
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Date: 3/26/2015 6:58:00 PM
This is very good,babe! I like to dig down deep and find pearls of wisdom and poetry. Thanks for your visit and comments.Check out,"TIME IN A CELL." Have a nice day!
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Date: 6/16/2014 3:51:00 AM
Truth be said, this is worth thinking about. How would I react if in same situation? Love has no boundaries...they say...but there are limitations. Still pondering my next move......:) Take care // paul
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Date: 3/13/2014 9:38:00 PM
It's the only way to do it in bed with a partner. You describe it well in this piece.
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Date: 1/12/2014 5:32:00 AM
Wonderful per excellent job. Your ink will not dry.
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Date: 12/26/2013 1:50:00 PM
Skat this is an excellent piece of work. I just picked it out randomly and I love it. Keep up the excellent job.
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Date: 12/18/2013 2:39:00 AM
Skat, a very good piece of work, good flow….David
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Date: 11/6/2013 12:24:00 AM
A great poem!
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Date: 10/17/2013 11:32:00 PM
SKAT This is a powerful piece. Very seductive and provocative in a deep way. Nice job
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Date: 7/17/2013 3:59:00 PM
really good poem. it was beautifully written. :))
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Date: 6/24/2013 7:27:00 AM
Well done, I enjoyed this piece.
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Date: 5/27/2013 9:27:00 PM
Lovely poem Skat,i really enjoyed this.Thanks for inviting me on your poem page.I have posted one called the enchanted day...do enjoy my second post here.
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Date: 5/7/2013 7:15:00 PM
Lots of people get their bear/bares mixed up, it can add a whole new dimension to bear loving lol. Thanks for your comment Skat, Take care, Richard
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Date: 4/20/2013 12:51:00 AM
Beautiful <3
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Date: 4/19/2013 3:18:00 PM
this is a super write. enjoyed reading.
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Date: 6/2/2011 5:58:00 AM
While stopping by to read some of your amazing poetry I would like to thank you for your comments on my poetry. Your words are always appreciated ~SKAT~. May the sun always shine down upon you and fill your soul with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/16/2010 6:40:00 PM
Why wouldn't I forgive you? I am naked and waiting already!
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Date: 9/22/2010 6:14:00 PM
I'VE WRITTEN SOMETHING SIMILAR VERY GOOD, I ALSO LIKE RHYTHM IT HAS TO IT
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