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A small heart, princess in pink, infant flawless love, steals and snuggles, in mortals and Gods soul. Infant fragile, kitten softness. Soft freshness babe, invites a finger's touch, a kiss. A kiss of sleep that seeps stealing her life. Nature's bounty drape on its pink casket. A breath, flutter of wings, the quiet deafening. A heart broken, the last farewell, grief unbounded, when will it end. Infant fragile, miss its presence. 6/27/2018 Poetry Contest: Fragmented Verse 2. Anger Sponsored by: Broken Wings- Dear Heart

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Date: 7/25/2018 2:56:00 PM
Eve congratulations on your win in my contest with this emotional and sad poem !
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Date: 7/25/2018 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Raw emotion you convey with imagery. Heartbreaking, so sad.
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Date: 7/24/2018 2:17:00 AM
Congrats, Eve on your win.
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Date: 7/23/2018 6:49:00 PM
Such sad thoughts and imagery so beautifully expressed in your poem, Eve. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/23/2018 2:06:00 PM
A lovely poignant poem Eve! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/1/2018 2:15:00 PM
You filled this heart wrenching poem with such sweet precious images of the infant's fragility. Beautifully sad.
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Date: 6/28/2018 7:32:00 AM
So well crafted, Eve and such a sad reminder of life's fragility xxxooo
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Date: 6/28/2018 6:50:00 AM
Kitten softness. The precious taken. We feel the pain...unbearable! Heartbreaking write...
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Date: 6/28/2018 6:31:00 AM
Eve, your words struck accord in me just now.. life is so precious and every day should be cherished!!
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Date: 6/28/2018 5:10:00 AM
when a child dies, the heart is fragmented forever. There is no recovery. I have enjoyed your verse Eve. wishing you a winning placement, Have a great day. May you want of nothing today but , God's pure grace.
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Date: 6/28/2018 4:09:00 AM
Heartbreaking :(
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Date: 6/28/2018 2:02:00 AM
So sad Eve, well written. There are no words when that happens. Tom
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