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Note: Yet again it is my great pleasure to present here another collaboration written by we three poets, my dear friends, Susan Ashley, Teppo Gren and I. 
I feel very blessed to have written my part several weeks ago and then watch as each of my wonderful writing partners carried the torch
to make this a very beautiful and far richer creation. As always both crafted such exquisite and profound verses to bring this poem to a very fine finish.
I hope the readers enjoy the fruits of the unification of our three hearts, souls and minds, with the sincere goal of each- striving to give to others..
All In All, True Magnificent Treasures Given Luscious the fruits, beautiful under moonlit beams firmly planted roots, outstandingly hot, lush-sent dreams all in all, glorified visions, heavenly sent treasured deeply with rapture stored, sweet love-nights spent. Tender kissing bites, honeyed dessert offered free wonderful the flights, through blossoming forests of trees all in all, miracles were given, lost soul found in resplendent nights, covering soft virgin grounds! Gold fairy dusted, jeweled eyes sending bright smiles each promise trusted, an angel with no dark wiles all in all, true magnificent treasures given gracefully sent, in true-deep bliss, purely driven. Beneath plum skies starlight glistening in her eyes I see all I desire and I do fantasize - looking into her goddess blues, crystal gazing; of our wild delight to be forever blazing... In Eden’s solitude we dance to soft sighs of waltzing wind-songs’ stirring verses promising love, with lilting whispered melodies so inspiring my appetite for her wanton and untiring. Ancient woodland’s moon casts smitten luminescence breathtaking in beauty she outshines its presence, ecstasy flows an intoxicating river inebriating essence in love’s deliver. Your vivacious beauty enhanced by golden rays illuminating your grace with a loving gaze with ardent reflection of my phantom desire to allow the pledge of love finally transpire. Two common souls released from infernal abyss to engage a rendezvous with heavenly bliss. Together our spirits soar to realms of delight, two lost souls united in the fading twilight. With a chapter closing in reverie’s accord we share a secret paradise of love’s award. All in all, wondrous senses of passion recall, from heart to soul we reminisce, as love is all. Robert J. Lindley, Susan Ashley and Teppo Gren (a collaboration) August 26, 2018 (a collaboration - joining as one voice and one searching soul) Note: Yet again it is my great pleasure to present here another collaboration written by we three poets, my dear friends, Susan Ashley, Teppo Gren and I. I feel very blessed to have written my part several weeks ago and then watch as each of my wonderful writing partners carried the torch to make this a very beautiful and far richer creation. As always both crafted such exquisite and profound verses to bring this poem to a very fine finish. I hope the readers enjoy the fruits of the unification of our three hearts, souls and minds, with the sincere goal of each- striving to give to others..

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Date: 8/17/2023 6:59:00 PM
Robert, Susan, and Teppo, yes, here you’ve 3 authored an exquisite piece of what feels partbof a classic romantic period — magical & enchanting. I must confess i am post-op 1 day & dozed off mid-way thru into a dream of miniature mythical dragon-.ike creatures owned by heartless young men who set them head to head to snarl & flair or flare for honor etc, then i woke up to the poem again in which Love took reign… a work of wonder!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/18/2023 4:43:00 AM
Thank you, my friend. Yes, we worked together to create this new creation. It was indeed a great pleasure for me to work with two such top classic poets as are Susan Ashley and my other very good friend Teppo Gren. As you dreamed so did we all hope this poem would touch deeply its readers. God bless you my friend.
Date: 10/6/2018 11:07:00 AM
Hi Robert, another excellent write from three true poets who shine in each poetic work written. You each give such poetic grace to this piece. I feel such peace within as I read through poetic grace. This is a true jewel in your poetic crowns. Just excellent my friend, just excellent. Your pens shall ever run gold. This one has to be a fave. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 10/14/2018 8:35:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend. So sorry that I have not replied sooner. Your words are kind and thank you for recognizing this is a collaboration in which we each gave our all. And in poetic fellowship worked together with great pleasure to compose and to present this piece..
Date: 9/19/2018 3:17:00 PM
Hello Robert,This poem is awesome! I found this poem very picturesque. Weel done threeor. Well done. have a nice day my friends.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/20/2018 9:42:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Susan, Teppo and I all put great care , deep thought and much time in creating this poem. I can not say enough great things about both of their contributions and inspirations embedded into this piece.
Date: 9/4/2018 12:12:00 PM
Congratulations on POTW! What a superb collaboration by three of our most gifted poets! Just a pleasure to read! Well done, Poets! Hugs and love. Pandita
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/5/2018 7:15:00 AM
Thank you my good friend. We three do our very best to present a poem that has a positive and uplifting message within its rhyming verses.
Date: 9/4/2018 9:11:00 AM
Congratulations my friend <3 xomo
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/5/2018 7:13:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend. Always a pleasure to hear from you.
Date: 9/2/2018 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations to you all on a well deserved POTW. Tom
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/3/2018 9:59:00 AM
My dear friend, I thank you on behalf of myself and my two wonderful co-authors, dear friends , Susan Ashley and Teppo Gren.
Date: 9/2/2018 10:25:00 AM
I thought I had commented on this before, but I don't find it. You are just soooooo good, Robert!! Sincere deserved congratulations!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/3/2018 9:58:00 AM
My dear friend, I thank you on behalf of myself and my two wonderful co-authors, dear friends , Susan Ashley and Teppo Gren.
Date: 9/2/2018 7:18:00 AM
Many congrats to you all on a magnificent collaboration and a very well deserved POTW:-) hugs Jan XX
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/3/2018 9:57:00 AM
My dear friend, I thank you on behalf of myself and my two wonderful co-authors, dear friends , Susan Ashley and Teppo Gren.
Date: 8/31/2018 3:11:00 AM
You three are flawless together, three minds merging together bringing the reader brilliant imagery, romance and food for the Soul type poetry. Bravo I am in awe of you three collaborators, true masters of PS.Love and hugs Robert Susan and Teppo a fave for me....Maria
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/31/2018 5:28:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend. It is indeed a great blessing and honor to be able to write with two dear friends that write such magnificent verses in our collaborations. We all enjoy this poetic camaraderie and are join together with the goal of presenting positive poetry influence to others.
Date: 8/30/2018 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations to all three amazing poets on achieving POTD with your beautifully written poem, thoroughly enjoyed reading. :))
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/30/2018 8:49:00 AM
Thank you good friend. This creation was the result of three poets working together in harmony with the goal of presenting a poem that we each can be very proud of and gift to the readers. Along the way, show mutual admiration for each other, for poetry as a great art form, and acknowledge the ability of the reader to see the positive result.
Date: 8/29/2018 2:52:00 PM
Robert, just coming back to congratulate you on this absolutely wonderful collaboration all three of you composed. Like I mentioned to TJ & Susan, you should al seriously consider putting a book together and selling me the first copy lol Absolutely love this...Best wishes my dear friend
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/29/2018 3:41:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend. If we continue to write these collaborations, maybe someday we will. If so it would be an honor to gift you a copy .. One can dream such sweet dreams, can one not? With my dear friends, TJ and Susan both having such great talent, nothing is impossible ...
Date: 8/29/2018 11:00:00 AM
Truly an amazing collab...the three musketeers strike again...love & light...^WW^
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/29/2018 3:37:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend. Yes, perhaps we tree musketeers are somehow attuned to each other's inner poetic heart. Able to join together in one voice and compose verse to give to others with the hope of helping. A blessing ...
Date: 8/28/2018 11:27:00 PM
The three of you created a magnificent poem Robert. Congratulations on having it honored as POTD at Susan's page. I loved it! : )
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/29/2018 3:31:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend. I am honored to be a part of our poetry team and forever grateful to have such dear friends and immensely talented co-writers.
Date: 8/28/2018 1:16:00 PM
I read this under Susan's name and thought it was a truly brilliant collaboration, congratulations to you all...
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/28/2018 2:07:00 PM
Charlie, thank you my good friend. Always a pleasure to read your poetry and your replies given. I truly admire and appreciate what I've learned from reading your superbly crafted sonnets!!
Date: 8/27/2018 4:27:00 PM
What a lush poem, blossoming with so many beautiful details. I marvel at the collaboration; the poem appears seamless, couldn't tell where one person's contribution began or ended. Well done, the three of you.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/27/2018 4:38:00 PM
Thank you my good friend. I am truly blessed to be so honored by my two dear friends, Teppo and Susan. They are such joy to compose with and also for me to learn from.. Our collaborations are the melding of three poetic minds in the hope to present something that delights, interests and may in some way truly give aid others.
Date: 8/27/2018 12:23:00 PM
Reading once again your gem of rarity Robert in collaboration with my fellow poets and friends, Susan and Teppo.. You have offered your ardent reader a wonderful journey to purify and beautify the soul by dipping the heart into your oceans of love and bliss.. a journey not to be missed! Your ardent reader inhales splendid imageries and celestial beauty! A great work of Love, Light and Healing! A FAV. Thank you for sharing your generosity and talent.. Be blessed always.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/27/2018 12:59:00 PM
My good friend, your words in reply, as does your poetry gives uplifting and thought provoking commentary to so very many appreciative poets here. Always a pleasure to find that a new poem finds great favor in your deep and true poetic eyes my friend! I thank you most sincerely on behalf of myself and my two very talented and wonderful writing partners..
Date: 8/27/2018 10:21:00 AM
Incredibly beautiful, passionate, romantic and with great flow...I can feel the love; you three do quite well, together.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/27/2018 12:52:00 PM
Thank you my good friend. Your are very kind to reply with such uplifting words and positive judgement of this poem and its purpose in being created and presented here.
Date: 8/26/2018 8:18:00 PM
Your words hold beauty, love and romance. A wonderful collaboration between three amazing poets. Simply breathtaking. :) Brandy
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/27/2018 12:44:00 PM
Thank you my friend, your kind words and inspiring assessment of this new piece is the filling in the pie that we wished for as we wrote to give to the reader a very positive and uplifting romantic piece.
Date: 8/26/2018 8:15:00 PM
Thank you my dear friends, Robert and Teppo.. what a joy and a thrill it is for me to be able to compose poetry with two of PS most esteemed, talented and artistic poets.. Robert, once again, your shining inspiration and romantic heart led the way in our collaboration and it was an elating creative experience - I'm extremely proud of the artistic work we three produced together. Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/27/2018 12:40:00 PM
Tis I that must thank both you and Teppo my dear friend. For the gift of writing with and being friends with such wonderful people and superb poets. Each collaboration is brought to a gleaming shine because of the exceptional verses you guys both bring to the new creation! The honor is real and one that I so truly and deeply cherish..
Date: 8/26/2018 6:29:00 PM
Treasures of beautiful words float in your scenic vision, adorned with love..magnificent imagery..a splendid collaboration. Kudos to you all, Robert, T. J., and Susan..you are tremendous artists.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/27/2018 12:37:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness my good friend. I am very pleased that you enjoyed our poem. I truly blessed to be composing with two of the Soup's most gifted poets and my dear friends, Teppo and Susan...
Date: 8/26/2018 5:54:00 PM
I must say it's a beautiful poem in every way...for me it has a tropical touch of magic...A lovely combination...a mix of talented poetry...a good drink indeed...All the best to all of you...
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/27/2018 12:34:00 PM
Writing with Susan and Teppo is truly a joy and a wonderfully creative experience. Their tremendous talents are as delightful and fantastic as is the immense poetic heart in their souls!
Date: 8/26/2018 5:25:00 PM
Thank you my dear friends, Susan and Teppo. This time, same as the other time, our composing together was a great gift to me and truly and greatly appreciated. May God bless you both...
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Susan Ashley
Date: 8/26/2018 8:02:00 PM
Your welcome my dear friend Robert. It is always my great honor and tremendous pleasure to have the chance to create poetry with you.. Many many thanks to you and your friendship..

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