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- a Vision Through Snow Crystals -

A snowflake always spells unique in words Frozen songs from heaven Melting into the heart Stunning winter kisses warm My passion is deep,rooted flowing through the heart Rolling out a carpet of divine purity What better way to rest easy Soft white footprints remain In the snow you’ve made Where an angel dances In a vision of beauty Warmly upon the breath Floating on the wave of love Silver dancing ice breaks This soul can now reach Heaven I melt into your snowflake A winter rose is born Blown forever silken sparkles kiss Into one beauty of a starlight vision On me so deeply inside purity and happiness blooms 26.12.2015 (unrhymed tercets) A Collaborated write by Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid

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Date: 2/7/2016 8:28:00 PM
Love the imagery painted in this writing
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Date: 2/7/2016 5:16:00 AM
- One of our beautiful pearls, dear friend - I wish you a blessed weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/7/2016 4:17:00 AM
You are the F. Astaire and G. Rogers of poetic collaborations! A seven to each!
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Date: 2/6/2016 8:29:00 PM
Hi Liam n' Lise!This is a very beautiful,romantic, passionate,dreamy,captivating and heartfelt love poem you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written!I just love it.A true glowing golden gem!Another very beautiful dreamy sweet romantic passionate heartfelt love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful,romantic n' sweet.Very enchanting!Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!Excellent imagery!Just superb!Outstanding collaboration! Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++ to each!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light! God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 2/6/2016 6:48:00 PM
How beautiful and romantic this is from both your creative pens! I was enchanted! #7
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Date: 2/6/2016 6:21:00 PM
Absolutely breathtaking imagery Anne Lise and Liam:-) hugs Jan xx7
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