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You'Re My Better Half

Freedom's finally mine, at the threshold of the forest where trees turned bluish-green, to a sea of grass that men does withhold. Summer country comfort my absence been. Of the forest where trees turned bluish-green, from one end of the vale to another summer country comfort my absence been. But for the grace of God blessed I wonder. From one end of the vale to another walking in the country the days go by, but for the grace of God blessed I wonder still I think of you, only you, pure sky. Walking in the country the days go by, who wouldn't wanna be me to look on thee, still I think of you, only you, pure sky. These are the days that God's been good to me. Who wouldn't wanna be me to look on thee, you can't hide beautiful, what about me. These are the days that God's been good to me you won, you're the only one, eyes best see. You can't hide beautiful, what about me. You're not alone tonight, don’t shut me out. You won; you're the only one, eyes best see. Some days you gotta dance and whirl about. You're not alone tonight, don’t shut me out. You're my better half and only you dove. Some days you gotta dance and whirl about; somebody like you, tangled up in love. You're my better half and only you dove. Live to love another day, better life somebody like you, tangled up in love. Stuck in the middle spellbound as my wife. Live to love another day, better life to a sea of grass that men does withhold. Stuck in the middle spellbound as my wife freedom's finally mine, at the threshold. 4/6/2018

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Date: 4/9/2018 1:22:00 AM
- A beautiful poem with many great songs from Keith Urban - Best wishes in the contest, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/7/2018 3:02:00 PM
You did it! A fantastic Pantoum! Are you a big fan of Keith Urben? I haven't heard many of his songs, but I think I like him. Well done, Eve, hugs
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/7/2018 3:45:00 PM
Thank you, Becca, for your compliment :) .. The reason I picked him a girlfriend had a photo taken with him after a concert.. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f_B9jCs8Atw here are a few more and yes he is cute , great voice , and very short
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Becca Teagan
Date: 4/7/2018 3:10:00 PM
I just watched the youtube video you posted up there, I really like the music. Plus he's so cute! ;)
Date: 4/7/2018 7:17:00 AM
Awesome creation Eve! I hear the cheers as I read your poem...and I hear the cheers as I listen to the song! Great title song you chose. A winning poem.
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/7/2018 12:10:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay, for the compliment, figuring what to write was the toughest. I’m glad I picked this artist. Hugs Eve ~`*

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