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- Sun Umbrella -

Sitting under my sun umbrella The ocean is my wonderful painting The sun shines on the small waves Far in the distance I can glimpse a small boat I must have my sunglasses on The sun heats I have shadow under my sun umbrella The sand on the beach is burning hot The waves along the beach creates scratches in the sand Turkey 23. 09. 2012 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Eve Roper

Date: 10/1/2017 10:52:00 PM

To be sitting on the beach under my umbrella watching the incoming waves and fishing boats sounds so good right now. You have painted a wonderful essence of the moment :-) enjoyed reading hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/2/2017 12:28:00 AM

- Thanks for the lovely comment, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 10/28/2012 4:31:00 PM

You painted a picture on the beach with this poem, nicely done:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2012 4:32:00 PM

Gwen, appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Ty Price

Date: 10/26/2012 4:37:00 PM

very nice imagery. great write.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2012 4:46:00 PM

Ty, appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/15/2012 8:23:00 PM

the ocean is great inspiration, you painted the scene beautifully.. Good poem :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/16/2012 2:22:00 AM

Sandra, appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/7/2012 4:00:00 AM

I sure would love to have that sun umbrella as well, Anne-Lise :)-- I really enjoyed this very relaxing and sunny write of yours! Just me saying hi and enjoy your week :) Hugs to you!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/7/2012 6:44:00 AM

Nikko, appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/30/2012 1:14:00 AM

Enjoy my friend in the days of vacation. We are all with you. Thanks for remembering us. Thanks too for your comment on my write. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/30/2012 2:30:00 PM

bl. thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 9/28/2012 8:10:00 PM

Wow!! A beautiful Turkey and an awesome poem written showing a vivid picture of this wonderful place!!! Thank you so much for I've enjoyed reading your new poems this morning my dear friend, Anne-Lise! Have a nice day and take care always!!! Love, leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2012 8:09:00 AM

Leonora, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/28/2012 1:28:00 PM

Ah I see you were in Turkey on your holiday when you wrote this. Sounds lovely to be sitting in the sun. The weather has been lovely and next week we start dipping into 10C or 50F . Sounds like winter is on it's way. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2012 2:10:00 PM

No summer heat more .... autumn and winter standing in front of our door. - Thank you Phyllis for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Anthony Nutter

Date: 9/26/2012 11:35:00 AM

Absolutely loved the deriptive last line. Enjoyed

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2012 12:09:00 PM

Anthony, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Gail Debole

Date: 9/26/2012 9:41:00 AM

Hi Anne Lise - Your warm title drew me in instantly to your lovely poem. Have a wonderful vacation. Thank you for commenting on my poem. - Much love to you, Gail

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2012 10:28:00 AM

Gail, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Joann Grisetti

Date: 9/26/2012 9:27:00 AM

Your poem makes me want to go see Turkey even more. Great job.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2012 10:27:00 AM

Joann, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 9/26/2012 7:56:00 AM

Sounds like the perfect vacation, and that you are enjoying every minute of it. Lovely write! Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2012 9:05:00 AM

Yes I do Cecilia, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/26/2012 6:57:00 AM

Anne Lise; You must be having a wonderful time. I can just picture it in my mind. Enjoy it and have some fun. Lucilla

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2012 7:41:00 AM

Lucilla, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/26/2012 6:16:00 AM

sitting here in rain soaked yorshire, this poem is a wonderful gem, thank you

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2012 7:40:00 AM

Harry, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Doreen Wright

Date: 9/25/2012 10:27:00 PM

The first line hooked me! What a beautiful poem filled with imagery. Great poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2012 3:32:00 AM

Doreen, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/25/2012 7:36:00 PM

Nice view from your oceanic painting! I like how you described the ocean scratching the sand...Turkey must be grand! :) gwendolen

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2012 3:30:00 AM

Gwen, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/25/2012 3:00:00 PM

no need now for the umbrella if the weather back home is windy??... huggs to you, anne!..:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2012 3:37:00 PM

----- OXOX Anne-Lise - - - - -

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/25/2012 11:30:00 AM

sunbrella......sounds so toasty pleasant.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2012 11:35:00 AM

Doris, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne

Date: 9/24/2012 2:31:00 PM

I can see why Turkey is so popular, my friend - sounds like paradise. Lovely write

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2012 3:05:00 AM

Jack, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Kash Poet

Date: 9/24/2012 12:18:00 PM

A beautiful picture of beach you have penned here Anne!Love this:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/24/2012 1:05:00 PM

Kash, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/24/2012 11:50:00 AM

Reads like a great place to be and enjoy..Thanks for stopping by..If this is for a contest, winner for sure..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/24/2012 11:53:00 AM

No contest Sara - thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/24/2012 11:20:00 AM

nothing like sauntering on the beach, anne.. is your umbrella back home or still jetting around?.. fine day to you with huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/24/2012 11:32:00 AM

Back in Norway, we have no need of sun umbrella Nette. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/24/2012 8:55:00 AM

a soothing image to be on the beach with a sun umbrella letting the breeze pass by looking at the waves.... makes me wanna go to the beach lol, enjoyed your write on the Sun Umbrella Anne,...p.d.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/24/2012 11:30:00 AM

Linda, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Cindy Cayton

Date: 9/24/2012 8:26:00 AM

Pretty poem as always, love your style of writingdear poetess, and in re: to your remark taken good within my heart. I have ALWAYS loved without it in return, yet this man is thee last one for me.. just cannot do it any longer. out of gas, life and love? smile is sad but true, life is suffering, I will get my reward in heaven, Love, Cindy Lu

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/24/2012 11:29:00 AM

Cindy, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 9/24/2012 6:15:00 AM

Beautiful, Anne-Lise. I can visualize the images. Always love the ocean. So awesome. Enjoy your vacation :) Love ya, Toquyen

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/24/2012 8:13:00 AM

Toquyen, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love and sunshine Anne-Lise :)