Invincible

exult, newlyweds you're truly invincible ~ aaarrrgghh! toilet seat's wet

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Bill Baker

Date: 11/16/2023 4:22:00 PM

Quite the gambit you run in this exquisite Senyru, gw. Well written, my friend. I like it! BB

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/16/2023 4:01:00 PM

surely that wasn't the demise of marital bliss! I still remember the 1st 'fight' Bill & I had...which way to put the toilet paper on the roll--over or under. I was an 'under' gal. He was an 'over' guy. Since that day the toilet paper rolls over. Choose your battles they say! :-) smiles and have a pleasant evening, Sara

John Lawless

Date: 11/16/2023 7:52:00 AM

better than the old days when you'd hear shouts from the woods......Hey, who moved the leaf pile or Dammit he left the branch up again.....

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/16/2023 1:59:00 AM

These days, by the time they're newlyweds, there nothing new left:)

Karen Jones

Date: 11/16/2023 12:17:00 AM

Hahaha! Funny and gross at sitting on a wet seat. Great job.